waves in the sea,
rushed towards me,
I knelt to touch the waves,
it touched my hands and left me!

I tried to leave but saw my legs immersed under the sand,
I tried to remove my legs from the sand,
while the same wave came again,

I didn't see as I was in a hurry to leave,
this time it came with a wild force,
burried my legs deeper in the sand,
not allowing me to go!

it touched my hands again,
and held me for a while,
made me smile,
it stood around me,
calm and mild,
yet a more wild,
I knelt again to enjoy it's return,
it left immersing me with it's touch so kind!
- Aatheera

NICE

Thank you

Nice poem .

Thankyou ☺

Once i was standing at a beach in midleast of water,
bended down an took a handful of wet sand an feeled it with a breeze of smile an eyes on it..
Suddenly a strong wave came an pushed me little back an found my hand empty as sand has gone along the wave.
I went back looking at the sunset with a smiling walk.

Same night i was sleeping in a wave of dream,
an i found my empty hand with hand over holding with an angel
her face was not clear but was feeling the breeze of happiness for a moment,
in excitement i opened my eyes to see her face...
but was nothing a dream of darkness with a small bean of lamplight..
So slept again with a smile..
Hoping someday will happen the same..

the way you set each line, you give a comfort zone for the reader to get some peace and set imagination levels higher too☺

could feel what you went thru' as I wrote this version after doing the same in the beach ☺

you must be blessed indeed to see angels in the dream, had goose bumps realising it

in the blessing or pain topic, you mentioned that blessing for you was angels in the dream n now I could relate the happiness you meant☺

let me now bless you with a magic so you may closely watch that face of the angel tonight n don't forget to explain that in your interesting version to me

Maybe your said words come true..
and if happened will be first You to be known...

Most beautiful portion is, you were the first person to recognise these.

A truly poet an a wonderful person
i had ever been with.


AatheerA
SUPER

soo kind of you ☺ would wait for it
n excited to know that I'm that first person

you inspire so many with your kindness n humourous nature, you are always a

keep radiating Robin☺ take care..

That's your kind feelings an behaviour..
But frankly I'm not doing anything great, but your approached way makes me feel so..
Secondly you itself are a good an super talented star..
you don't need anyone inspirations,
you itself are jewels of words..
Quality living person
Take Care Too

to be frank, the good vibes n inspirations I got from you n everyone here is making me radiate back that glow ☺ guess that's what is happening now thankful always and you are my first always..

Great honour that somewhere between so many i got the first preference.

Would I be first or last or nowhere,
that's not a big deal, because times ahead passed maybe you may not even remember me or I..

tc.

Till now, I've never forgotten people who have motivated n inspired me..ive always treasured the kindness which brings so much healing to me..

you will be remembered till I live my days destined!

hope this assurance holds good ☺ but doesn't matter if I'm forgotten, no worries at all n that's reality too

take care n have best n happy days ahead

My name is Robin
And i will always keep saying you
hi... even thou you said bye..
Won't leave you so easily..
shadow always walks along...

ha ha well framed once again☺

a shadow might be dark,
but it always accompanies the light which has a spark!

when Robin gets dull,
we are there to bring out his radiance well!

cheer up Robin and keep smiling,
as friends are always there with you to keep your radiance shining ⭐

keep radiating Robin ☺

As a friend i would like to give a stop point here, as poem columns is becoming a chitchat one.. an few will frame it in an other way..

FRIEND
FOREV

yes felt the same agree!

Beautiful wave theory

Thank you