Topic: with the waves in beach today 😇
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Fri 10/29/21 08:42 AM
It's the playful act of the wave to lure us to wait for its touch and leave us when we are deep rooted in sand because of it... isn't it

Aatheera's photo
Fri 10/29/21 09:12 AM
It's the playful act of the wave to lure us to wait for its touch and leave us when we are deep rooted in sand because of it... isn't it

True, it's nice to experience that as well :thumbsup:

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Fri 10/29/21 09:21 AM
Undoubtedly :thumbsup:

 Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ's photo
Mon 12/20/21 11:01 PM
:cherry_blossom::slight_smile::cherry_blossom:

 Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ's photo
Tue 03/22/22 07:42 AM
Standing Today On The Beach
Remembered those earlier Peace.
When we were unknown an Stranger.
Slowly we covered some Extends.
Distance of being far was getting Arranged.

A fabulous was that feel of Heat.
When YOU first time travelled to my Feet. waves on beach
Just Like You & Me As A Couple Meet.
Usual beginning started Winding.
As waves an breezes were Pounding.
Like Yours & Mine hearts Bonding.

We began to get more Closer
As halfway of body in Waves
Slashing of water Over an Again.
Same as You & Me were Holding
The Hands of Walk on Beach
Together:wave:
Sunset is about to Come
For today these is Done.
Walking away with a Smile.
Remained thoughts to move ahead Likewise.
YOU & ME.
With The Waves Of The Beach...........

.......Robin

Aatheera's photo
Tue 03/22/22 08:17 AM
Standing Today On The Beach
Remembered those earlier Peace.
When we were unknown an Stranger.
Slowly we covered some Extends.
Distance of being far was getting Arranged.

A fabulous was that feel of Heat.
When YOU first time travelled to my Feet. waves on beach
Just Like You & Me As A Couple Meet.
Usual beginning started Winding.
As waves an breezes were Pounding.
Like Yours & Mine hearts Bonding.

We began to get more Closer
As halfway of body in Waves
Slashing of water Over an Again.
Same as You & Me were Holding
The Hands of Walk on Beach
Together:wave:
Sunset is about to Come
For today these is Done.
Walking away with a Smile.
Remained thoughts to move ahead Likewise.
YOU & ME.
With The Waves Of The Beach...........

.......Robin

"A fabulous was that feel of Heat,
When you first time travelled to my feet, waves on beach"

Robin, I loved it n particularly the lines above were expressed so nicely :blush:
I too have felt the above lines exactly n have written this feeling as a poem in my diary few days before ❤

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Tue 03/22/22 09:45 AM
"A fabulous was that feel of Heat,
When you first time travelled to my feet, waves on beach"

Robin, I loved it n particularly the lines above were expressed so nicely :blush:
I too have felt the above lines exactly n have written this feeling as a poem in my diary few days before ❤

I wrote it before having the coffee ☕, 2 hours ago.. :rolling_eyes: That time was having something difference in mind after the first phase, when you were in chase:pensive: :stuck_out_tongue:

Thank:innocent:You

mig25's photo
Tue 03/22/22 03:06 PM
I love this!!

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Tue 03/22/22 08:24 PM

waves in the sea,
rushed towards me,
I knelt to touch the waves,
it touched my hands and left me!

I tried to leave but saw my legs immersed under the sand,
I tried to remove my legs from the sand,
while the same wave came again,

I didn't see as I was in a hurry to leave,
this time it came with a wild force,
burried my legs deeper in the sand,
not allowing me to go!

it touched my hands again,
and held me for a while,
made me smile,
it stood around me,
calm and mild,
yet a more wild,
I knelt again to enjoy it's return,
it left immersing me with it's touch so kind!
- Aatheera





Nice one Aatheera ... well published one...

Aatheera's photo
Wed 03/30/22 02:28 PM
Thankyou Mig and Philips :slight_smile:

Vibes's photo
Wed 03/30/22 11:44 PM
The feel of wave nicely narrated.
Waves
When they touch -the
Withered mind
Will all flourish
Wandering thoughts
Waves away
We poke n prod
Widen with eyes
Wonder of nature
Worth enjoying


Becky Sango's photo
Thu 04/28/22 07:09 PM
I really like this too.. Nice one Aatheera!

Aatheera's photo
Thu 04/28/22 11:18 PM
I really like this too.. Nice one Aatheera!

Thankyou Becky :slight_smile: Happy that you liked it :sparkles:

Aatheera's photo
Thu 04/28/22 11:19 PM
The feel of wave nicely narrated.
Waves
When they touch -the
Withered mind
Will all flourish
Wandering thoughts
Waves away
We poke n prod
Widen with eyes
Wonder of nature
Worth enjoying

Thankyou Vibes :sparkles:

Aatheera's photo
Tue 05/17/22 07:57 AM
Waves hitting the shore,
Rarely seen rude to the core,
Often stays calm in it's touch,
Might delay sometimes to reach!

Waves hitting the shore,
Holds promises more,
To own the shore!
To touch it tender or,
Hit so hard rare!

The shore remains constant in love,
Owning the promise of the waves as a vow!
Awaiting the waves to reach it's caring ends,
To give away the calmness to the rushing water's bends!

Waves hitting the shore,
Holds a perfect bonding to owe,
the understanding expected from the shore,
To accept it's love in whatever way as a whole!

Your love be it in any form,
Touches my soul which awaits your words so calm!

My care be it in any way,
Touches your adorable soul to convey,
the depth of respect I owe,
To your diligent vow!

Waves hitting the shore,
Portrays the bonding of our understanding perfectly as a whole!
-Aatheera

JulieABush's photo
Tue 05/17/22 11:32 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Laska Paul 's photo
Tue 05/17/22 10:43 PM

Sunset + Beach + Friends + Food = A Total Perfection
Nicely Written

Kevin's photo
Wed 05/18/22 02:00 AM
WoW!!!

Painting a picture, with words isn't easy! You are good at it, KUDOS

Aatheera's photo
Wed 05/18/22 06:04 AM
Thank you Julie and Paul :slight_smile:
Thank you Kevin Sir for your words, means alot for me :bouquet::slight_smile:
Happy to know that You all liked it :shamrock::sparkles:

Vibes's photo
Wed 05/18/22 09:34 AM
Waves again ! !

Waves on shore
Want to score
Hate you ever
Shore says never
Reels so much
Feels the touch
Listen thee man
Lesson to human

Nice !