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Edited by
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Thu 07/15/21 10:14 AM
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Does beauty hide in the dark?
Does beauty shine, when you shine? Some who see are seers. It is sweat and tears to find multifaceted her. She is the gem that you can not touch, she changes, she twists away from your hold. Till, dig deep - There are deep, dark caves which are secrets calling to be found and heard in ancient songs of sisters. Five fingers dig. One for courage. Two for depth, Three for patience, Four for recognition. Five makes a fist. Six is opening your find, your hand to reveal diamonds. A worthy find when light is the rainbow prism guiding your eyes. Back to the beauty of light found in a sparkling crystal. . |
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Wow... I am speechless!
This is an immense honour, and absolutely beautiful! The sentence "the ancient song of sisters" brings tears to my eyes! I totally love it. Thank you, thank you, thank you!! You have a beautiful talent, Ladywind! 
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I try. Some see
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I try. Some see I see . I tried but same end result ....a resounding NO !!!ha ha !! |
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Nice poem
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I enjoyed reading this substantive talented poem, Ladywind.
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P o e t r y : The best Words in The best order. |
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Naww Robin...you dragging up my poetry is sweet. Enjoy
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It's a pleasure an best things always shines as your poems...
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Edited by
Unknow
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Thu 12/09/21 02:37 AM
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It's a pleasure an best things always shines as your poems... Bless x I wrote this for SparklingCrystal actually. Her lovely, strong feminity is appreciated. She is a joy to Mingle with. 
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