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I think you taste like lightening.
At first a soft tingle, then a bolt, that rushes down my body I am on fire for more. That guttural sound you make is heaven breaking the sky - A primal, baritone thunder as deep calls to deep. |
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Nice poem .
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I think it's more than nice, it's fantastic!
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Thanks...
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Sensational! Elegant expression depicting a universally relatable and palpable force of nature.
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Sensational! Elegant expression depicting a universally relatable and palpable force of nature. Thanks Techno |
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I think you taste like lightening. At first a soft tingle, then a bolt, that rushes down my body I am on fire for more. That guttural sound you make is heaven breaking the sky - A primal, baritone thunder as deep calls to deep. Umm, yeah, this one is, well, umm, breathtaking |
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Thanks Mig, it makes me smile that people read more than what my metaphors say.
No need to feel awkward. |
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