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figured I’d test the water. All feedback is appreciated.
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My quick assessment is if you don't have a picture...how are you supposed to get any interest in you?
I would post a picture and then ask again... 
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Firstly, the overly verbose disclaimer
you've c&p'd into your profile? Lose it. |
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You post Contact info in your profile.
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Totally agree with a previous comment and ditch the disclaimer otherwise people will think they have to sign a contract in order to contact you.
Sounds like something from the official secrets act. |
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Seems you felt like writing an essay on law?
One solid block of text, doubt anyone would read that. Not sure what you want either. Just sex? Be clear, not vague. Get a better profile picture. This one looks weird with the goggles at the end of your nose. Old photos are useless too. It's about how you look now, not 10-20 years ago. All in all... bad profile. |
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Quick assessment: Quickly rewrite your profile page.
*you giving out personal information isn't right and also contradictory to your long post script. *you should be having a reason of that legal disclaimer in your profile page, but does it really serve any purpose? |
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With that lengthy write up I think you are trying to show that you have a sense of humor but you over did it a tad.
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I’d write some stuff about you as a person in the about me section and maybe the kind of person you are seeking .
Remove your email , you don’t need to have that on show and could also lead to consequences. I’m presuming the last bit has got to be a joke as no one would have that there for it to be serious , but I’d definitely remove that , if you want to add a joke there make it short and catchy as no one will want to read through that block of text . |
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