Topic: Yay, my first poem in my age of 30 🤦
Güney's photo
Sun 05/16/21 02:28 AM
Edited by Güney on Sun 05/16/21 02:29 AM
Eyes star-bright sparkles and shades full of color,
Hair is a wave of heavenly flames caught my heart on fire,
Inviting are the lips just as the most fruitful vineyards to have a taste,
Skin smooth as the calming wave or more like a warm sands in the midsummer, :ocean:

Although hard to describe your beauty,
It seems there is more to your story,
Think of me free, I hope everything is dandy,
Would you date me if I bring you a daisy with some candy. :blossom:

I wrote this for someone, waiting for their response. Hoping it won't be too harsh for my poor heart.

JulieABush's photo
Sun 05/16/21 03:43 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Güney's photo
Sun 05/16/21 05:42 AM
Edited by Güney on Sun 05/16/21 05:43 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Thank you, my first go on poetry. Tried to keep it simple. Not my native language but I gave it my best shot.

no photo
Mon 05/17/21 03:18 PM

Eyes star-bright sparkles and shades full of color,
Hair is a wave of heavenly flames caught my heart on fire,
Inviting are the lips just as the most fruitful vineyards to have a taste,
Skin smooth as the calming wave or more like a warm sands in the midsummer, :ocean:

Although hard to describe your beauty,
It seems there is more to your story,
Think of me free, I hope everything is dandy,
Would you date me if I bring you a daisy with some candy. :blossom:

I wrote this for someone, waiting for their response. Hoping it won't be too harsh for my poor heart.



Naww, lovely. I hope she responds positively.

mzrosie's photo
Mon 05/17/21 04:15 PM
Minle2's newest poet happy waving

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