Topic: Bones ((trigger warning))
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Tue 05/11/21 08:26 AM
Edited by Unknow on Tue 05/11/21 09:23 AM
I think I feel too much.
My bones ache
when I remember.

And I think I think too much
when my bones ache.

I forget I am flesh
that needs you -
but not quite you.

Just a whisper on the wind
with feathers falling
that mount
into a mountain.

Too high to be true wings that
an Angel would shed
to reach me
as I fall and fall,
without one feather touched.

Call it the first years
when love was absent
when the black dog came
and he became my dark friend.

The black dog with a bone
never gave up, he chewed that bone.

A child with a black dog and bone?

Tell me a story that has no promise.
Or tell me my bones are not
owned by a black dog
and there is flesh that
remains

somewhere

Just not here.


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Tue 05/11/21 09:39 AM
Wow!!!!!

So Beautiful smooched

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Tue 05/11/21 09:43 AM

Wow!!!!!

So Beautiful smooched


Thank you. I thought it was a bit too raw for consumption....waving

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Tue 05/11/21 12:44 PM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

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Tue 05/11/21 05:49 PM
Hi

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Tue 05/11/21 06:28 PM
O.(h) so very intense, without even knowing from where this comes within you,
I felt every raw emotion. Bravo, yet again :heart:

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Wed 05/12/21 02:13 PM
Superb poem, Miss! So heart-touching!

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Wed 05/12/21 06:17 PM
A powerful expression. If the marrow core remains, I think there's still hope for weary bones. waving

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Wed 05/12/21 09:27 PM

Good words are worth Much and cost Little . But the Whole thing is That ...
Its Much Appreciated !

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Thu 05/13/21 12:21 AM

O.(h) so very intense, without even knowing from where this comes within you,
I felt every raw emotion. Bravo, yet again :heart:


The poem is about childhood abuse my friend. Those who know will resonate...I think it needs to be talked about, perhaps not here though.
The black dog is a symbolic word for depression.

Love and strength to anyone who has been there. It calls your name and the memories are never forgotten, though we try xx ❤

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Thu 05/13/21 12:45 AM


Good words are worth Much and cost Little . But the Whole thing is That ...
Its Much Appreciated !


Thank you. Sorry I give you chit about being here and married. You really are a sweetheart x

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Thu 05/13/21 12:47 AM

A powerful expression. If the marrow core remains, I think there's still hope for weary bones. waving


Hey gorgeous, thanks.
I challenge you to give me poem in return that touches me ❤

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Thu 05/13/21 12:48 AM

Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .


:heart:

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Thu 05/13/21 12:48 AM

Superb poem, Miss! So heart-touching!


Thank you sweets xxx

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Thu 05/13/21 12:49 AM

Hi


Hai.