Topic: Bones ((trigger warning)) | |
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Tue 05/11/21 09:23 AM
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I think I feel too much.
My bones ache when I remember. And I think I think too much when my bones ache. I forget I am flesh that needs you - but not quite you. Just a whisper on the wind with feathers falling that mount into a mountain. Too high to be true wings that an Angel would shed to reach me as I fall and fall, without one feather touched. Call it the first years when love was absent when the black dog came and he became my dark friend. The black dog with a bone never gave up, he chewed that bone. A child with a black dog and bone? Tell me a story that has no promise. Or tell me my bones are not owned by a black dog and there is flesh that remains somewhere Just not here. . |
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Wow!!!!!
So Beautiful |
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Wow!!!!! So Beautiful Thank you. I thought it was a bit too raw for consumption.... |
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Nice poem .
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Hi
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O.(h) so very intense, without even knowing from where this comes within you,
I felt every raw emotion. Bravo, yet again |
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Superb poem, Miss! So heart-touching!
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A powerful expression. If the marrow core remains, I think there's still hope for weary bones.
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Good words are worth Much and cost Little . But the Whole thing is That ... Its Much Appreciated ! |
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O.(h) so very intense, without even knowing from where this comes within you, I felt every raw emotion. Bravo, yet again The poem is about childhood abuse my friend. Those who know will resonate...I think it needs to be talked about, perhaps not here though. The black dog is a symbolic word for depression. Love and strength to anyone who has been there. It calls your name and the memories are never forgotten, though we try xx ❤ |
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Good words are worth Much and cost Little . But the Whole thing is That ... Its Much Appreciated ! Thank you. Sorry I give you chit about being here and married. You really are a sweetheart x |
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A powerful expression. If the marrow core remains, I think there's still hope for weary bones. Hey gorgeous, thanks. I challenge you to give me poem in return that touches me ❤ |
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Nice poem . |
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Superb poem, Miss! So heart-touching! Thank you sweets xxx |
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Hi Hai. |
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