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Hello, all. As my title says, I'm new. I'm not very good at writing about myself, so I would like some feedback regarding my profile. I know it's very concise, but is it enough? Is it... fun/ inviting? Thanks!
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Yes your profile is concise but it also says everything you need it to say. It is a good basic profile. You can always add to it as you go. Just remember, it is not the size of a profile that makes it good, it is the quality that does. Good luck to you.
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Hey Malia..I am new too and in my opinion people here don't care to check your profile but just your profile pics and additional ones are what they are interested into..so focus on that..
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Hey Malia..I am new too and in my opinion people here don't care to check your profile but just your profile pics and additional ones are what they are interested into..so focus on that.. ️
That is your opinion but people do care to check profiles. I do and just having good profile photos is not good enough. People like to see something written. |
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Bro I am a real person and have written a lot in my profile..but still girls just send me their whatsapp numbers, demanding for contacting privately or video chatting..so how can I belive that my profile writing matters to them ..
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Hey Malia..I am new too and in my opinion people here don't care to check your profile but just your profile pics and additional ones are what they are interested into..so focus on that.. ️
Rahi, you speak for yourself. There are many people who read profiles; myself included! There’s a thread about reading profiles in here somewhere, perhaps you should read that. Malia, your profile is just fine. As Poetrywriter said, it’s concise. It tells us something about you. Good job 
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Thank you
 I'll add things as I think of them.
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You are welcome Malia!
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Edited by
SparklingCrystal 💖💎
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Wed 10/28/20 09:37 AM
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I don't feel coherence in your profile. it's more like a bunch of lose statements. And what's with the dog thing to start it of with? Weird.
I'd change it and rewrite it, make it into a more feeling thing as opposed to statements. Like "Honesty is the quickest way to my heart". Wow. That makes me feel warm and fuzzy! Not... None of it has 'bite' or persona. Not sure what the right word would be. It's as if you found some statements here and there, copy/paste them and that's it. Good luck! 
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I don't feel coherence in your profile. . .
Good luck! Thanks. I'll take that until consideration. I don't want to write multiple paragraphs, though. I feel like that scares people away/ they won't read it. |
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That's also not what I advised you to do, but alas.
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Photos are fine. The about me feels a bit cliche. The bit about the dogs and just friends is okay, but overall it's "eh."
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Okay. I tweaked it a bit. Is it any better or did I make it worse?
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I don't know what it was like before but I think your profile is fine as it is.
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Thanks
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Better. Maybe a bit more on the type of person you seek. Outside your race isn't narrowing it down all that much.
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I edited it once again.
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Well, you did it :)
Now it is a coherent story and even very positive. Well done and good luck! |
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You nailed it Malia! Looks really great. Good luck to you!
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Thank you, guys!
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