Hi,

Could you spend a few moments and rate my profile? I seem to be getting views from only women in their 20s and early 30s and virtually none about my own age.

It's quite wordy but nothing really about the kind of woman that you're looking for. 6/10.

Delete everything before "I'm a creative person..." and seriously work on the stuff after that. It's way too long.
Much the info in it shouldn't be a profile at all. A profile is meant to pique interest, not to tell your lifestory and all the ins and outs.

Work on that and you might actually get talking to someone your age. The so called younger ones are likely scammers. You get that with a profile that isn't so good.\

Oh, and do add what kind of woman and relationship you're after.

Now it looks a lot better!
Good luck.

That's much Improved. 8/10.

Rate my profile 1-10 please no spoiler meme.
I report cash app hoes

Please start your own thread so there will be no confusion as to who members are responding to.

Thank you.

WHY are you mentioning sex?? That's why you're getting responses from young women. Duh! It also makes you look extremely shallow and I question your priorities. Do you want a quality woman or not? Add a couple of pictures where you're having fun. Smile. Good luck!

The sex bit is totally off putting.
Get rid of the second picture and add more pictures

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Your profile is the 11th best profile in the history of profiles. It would have made the top ten had you not made another whiny thread about not liking your reviews.

I find sarcasm off putting. And my message title wasn't whiny.

I find the need for validation off putting, but I do admire persistence.

Cranky, you didn't even read it!

and just how can you tell that?
this site has never shown same sex views in the who viewed me list
as for rating the rewrite...

so far it is the best you've done so far.


as for the lack of traffic through your profile...

this site has never been a take away menu except for the scammers and phishers posing as 20 or 30 somethings.

use search and send messages(not one liners)to ladies who have actually been on line in at least the last 4 days. then accept that no answer is an answer.
and jump for joy at the responses you do get

I know he didn't read my profile because there was no information in his post pertaining to it, just a sarky remark. Sure, he may have accessed it, but the words on the page didn't register with him.

As for traffic through my profile I get between 6 and 20 views per day, depending on how active I am on the site. I consider this adequate.

You think I didn't look at it? You want a genuine assessment? Here goes:

Lose the first four sentences since they add nothing. You have lots of hobbies but too many to mention? Lose that sentence as well. How about just mentioning the robot and sculpting.

There's a certain tone of challenge in your essay that is likely going to be off putting. Without using too fine a point, I'd suggest incorporating more wit, charm, and humor. You should be attempting to charm the reader not throw down a gauntlet.

You could probably use a couple of more photos. The full body shot is far away, you're not facing the camera and the quality of both isn't great.

You're far too worried about what people think. One reason for my sarcasm to just about EVERYONE on this site is to see how they handle it. Do they respond with wit? Good humor? Do they get butt hurt? It tells me a lot more about a person than a freakin' essay they wrote to try and sell themselves

Cranky, are you always this confrontational with people? You come across like you are spoiling for a fight. It is not big, it is not clever and it is quite definitely ill-advised.

I will be amazed if the moderator allows this thread to continue.

This!

I'll also add that it's way too heavy on what you want/expect in a woman. It comes across like it's all about you. What, besides a delicious spaghetti carbonara, will you bring to the relationship? The goal is to attract women, give them something that would want them to meet you. The way it stands, you come across like someone on a high horse who wants a women who sits on an even higher horse.

Perhaps come down to earth a bit? Best of luck to you!