Topic: Numinous
Ladywind7's photo
Fri 02/21/20 03:47 AM
You watched me,
tasted every letter I wrote
and each letter in you
became words

of fondness.

My words
are fire, brimstone and honey,
so hard to swallow.
And yet you let slide
each Alpha to Omega
and digested me
in fullness.

You scare me
with your ability to
know me so.
I am now inside you,

you have me reborn.

From your unravelled tongue you speak the language of scrolls.
Bees are burning,
as am I.
Melting in sealed wax messages,
you have broken me,
awoken me,
to the newness of the alphabet
and all the words I want to give homage to you.

Enthiran 's photo
Fri 02/21/20 04:05 AM
:thumbsup:

flowerforyou

no photo
Fri 02/21/20 04:27 AM
Another beautiful poem, thank you :bouquet:.

technovative's photo
Fri 02/21/20 12:43 PM
A gifted expression extolling adoration for the source.

no photo
Fri 02/21/20 02:19 PM
Haha I kind of read that and imagined it a theater production :smile:

There's an idea,have you ever tried writing a short play?

Anyhoo :thumbsup: Good date then?:smile:

Ladywind7's photo
Fri 02/21/20 06:12 PM

Haha I kind of read that and imagined it a theater production :smile:

There's an idea,have you ever tried writing a short play?

Anyhoo :thumbsup: Good date then?:smile:


My best friend and I used to write plays, encourage our friends to participate and we would perform them for the school. We were very creative together, she was my right hand woman. I was Captain of the debating team, she was my feisty second. I would win speech competitions and she would come second.
Shame she lives in Perth now :smile:

Ladywind7's photo
Fri 02/21/20 06:16 PM

Another beautiful poem, thank you :bouquet:.


Again, thank you. I appreciate your comments :smile:

Ladywind7's photo
Fri 02/21/20 06:16 PM

:thumbsup:

flowerforyou


Thank you.

Ladywind7's photo
Fri 02/21/20 06:17 PM

A gifted expression extolling adoration for the source.


Yes, he inspires me ...

Bastet127's photo
Fri 02/21/20 06:29 PM
I know when poetry really resonates with me because
I do a lot of “oh I wish I had come up with that line”, there
are a bunch on those lines in this. I really, really like it!

p.s. I noticed past tense in first stanza, rest in present. I
must just have an eye for that lol. flowers

Ladywind7's photo
Fri 02/21/20 06:58 PM

I know when poetry really resonates with me because
I do a lot of “oh I wish I had come up with that line”, there
are a bunch on those lines in this. I really, really like it!

p.s. I noticed past tense in first stanza, rest in present. I
must just have an eye for that lol. flowers


That is because in the first stanza, I was watched,(past).
The rest is actually the present time.

Thank you your kind words Bastet :sunflower::heart::rose:

JulieABush's photo
Sat 02/22/20 04:17 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Ɔʎɹɐx's photo
Sat 02/22/20 06:36 AM
Names or it never happened

Ladywind7's photo
Sat 02/22/20 06:37 AM

Names or it never happened


Huh? You know I wrote this about you.

Ladywind7's photo
Sat 02/22/20 06:39 AM
Ok Cyrex. This poem is for you and about you xxx

Ɔʎɹɐx's photo
Sat 02/22/20 06:42 AM
blushing

Ladywind7's photo
Sat 02/22/20 06:54 AM

blushing


No words? Well I have too many to create. You are in my sphere. Watch out poetry section. I am falling..... :heart: