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You watched me,
tasted every letter I wrote and each letter in you became words of fondness. My words are fire, brimstone and honey, so hard to swallow. And yet you let slide each Alpha to Omega and digested me in fullness. You scare me with your ability to know me so. I am now inside you, you have me reborn. From your unravelled tongue you speak the language of scrolls. Bees are burning, as am I. Melting in sealed wax messages, you have broken me, awoken me, to the newness of the alphabet and all the words I want to give homage to you. |
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Another beautiful poem, thank you .
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A gifted expression extolling adoration for the source.
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Haha I kind of read that and imagined it a theater production
There's an idea,have you ever tried writing a short play? Anyhoo Good date then? |
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Haha I kind of read that and imagined it a theater production There's an idea,have you ever tried writing a short play? Anyhoo Good date then? My best friend and I used to write plays, encourage our friends to participate and we would perform them for the school. We were very creative together, she was my right hand woman. I was Captain of the debating team, she was my feisty second. I would win speech competitions and she would come second. Shame she lives in Perth now |
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Another beautiful poem, thank you . Again, thank you. I appreciate your comments |
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Thank you. |
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A gifted expression extolling adoration for the source. Yes, he inspires me ... |
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I know when poetry really resonates with me because
I do a lot of “oh I wish I had come up with that line”, there are a bunch on those lines in this. I really, really like it! p.s. I noticed past tense in first stanza, rest in present. I must just have an eye for that lol. |
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I know when poetry really resonates with me because I do a lot of “oh I wish I had come up with that line”, there are a bunch on those lines in this. I really, really like it! p.s. I noticed past tense in first stanza, rest in present. I must just have an eye for that lol. That is because in the first stanza, I was watched,(past). The rest is actually the present time. Thank you your kind words Bastet |
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Nice poem .
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Names or it never happened
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Names or it never happened Huh? You know I wrote this about you. |
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Ok Cyrex. This poem is for you and about you xxx
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No words? Well I have too many to create. You are in my sphere. Watch out poetry section. I am falling..... |
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