Reading through the posts here, I realise how diverse and rich this forum is with talent. I almost feel to put my words in such a telented enviroment.

Abomination

Love a fleet footed thing, will steal away an unwary soul
for those who would be coy, a whispered word of endless pain
Deep chasms shelter a tortured soul, a respite, a refrain
O’ if only the world I see could be at all logical
Then the poisoned chalice would not have to be taken whole,
T’wix the rising of the sun, till moonlight fades, I abstain
Break free I’ve yearned so long, from the iron bands which constrain
My tepid heart, to be unleashed, I will beg, plead, cajole


Can it still be, for me, loves sweet grandeur
A token, a travesty, holding onto a past’s great plan
T’was it a shimmer, a mirage, on the memories hazy horizon

Till morning sun breaks it’s fast, I shall raconteur
And forestall the burdens, my emotions to the van
What other only see, as me, a fool, and abomination

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh such depth,, such emotion,, i soo hope you will continue to share you will all of us,,,

Beautiful

Welcome to JSH

Thank you LAmom. Your words are kind and appreciated. This is a wonderful site and am enjoying it greatly.

Awesome write hope to see more

Hello fellow Aussie.

great post

very nice indeed

Welcome to the forums....great write...hope to see more.

Welcome to the poetry section...
Write away!

"Reading through the posts here, I realise how diverse and rich this forum is with talent. I almost feel to put my words in such a telented enviroment."

well it just got better
welcome

Cheers everyone, thanks for the replies. Jess......fellow Australian *looks about....where,where* Pffftttt I am a Queenslander. *ducks*

It is a great place the forums here. And a great bunch of people.

"Reading through the posts here, I realise how diverse and rich this forum is with talent. I almost feel to put my words in such a telented enviroment. "


get outa here with that, express yourself and have fun lol, thats what we are all here for, welcome.

Welcome to JSH, and the was a very indepth emotional read, I enjoyed it and can't wait for more....

So am I.... I just live in the best bit!!!