Topic: "My Friend" This one is short but one of my best.
someguy1313's photo
Fri 12/14/07 09:55 AM
My friend, I hate to do it
But our friendship just can't last.
The times we shared together have faded to the past.
I told you it would happen.
Our friendship was bound to end
Although I know you care I don't consider you a friend.
Please don't try to argue but try to understand
That times change two people, as the tide changes the sand.
Our friendship has to end, for I look at you in a different way.
I've fallen, fallen in love with you "My Friend."

trustingfate's photo
Fri 12/14/07 09:56 AM
awwwwww:cry:

hardworkingmom2's photo
Fri 12/14/07 09:57 AM
Speachless

neveragain's photo
Fri 12/14/07 10:00 AM
Perfectly writenflowerforyou Who is the lucky girl?

Italy0219's photo
Fri 12/14/07 10:07 AM
my husband had a friend, and now he's gone...:cry:

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 12/14/07 10:09 AM
Very good Humm have you told your friend/flowerforyou

someguy1313's photo
Fri 12/14/07 10:12 AM
I did... I wrote this in 1999 and gave it to her. We are still talk today but it never went anywhere... She said I scared her, she never did explain what she meant by that.

someguy1313's photo
Fri 12/14/07 10:12 AM

my husband had a friend, and now he's gone...:cry:


What do you mean?

Unsane's photo
Fri 12/14/07 10:34 AM
very nice. nice twist. :D

good write. keep it up.

someguy1313's photo
Fri 12/14/07 10:51 AM
thanks... dont see guys in here to offen

CrazyPalindrome's photo
Fri 12/14/07 10:54 AM

thanks... dont see guys in here to offen


Haha...

All I have to say is Poetry is not for sissies. It takes a lot to take your emotions and put them down on a page. Nice work... just too bad it didn't quite work out for you.

neveragain's photo
Fri 12/14/07 11:52 AM


thanks... dont see guys in here to offen


Haha...

All I have to say is Poetry is not for sissies. It takes a lot to take your emotions and put them down on a page. Nice work... just too bad it didn't quite work out for you.



I agree

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 12/14/07 01:55 PM
drinker

Great way to start off being friends...

neveragain's photo
Mon 12/17/07 04:48 AM
Edited by neveragain on Mon 12/17/07 04:48 AM
nevermind

someguy1313's photo
Mon 12/17/07 08:01 AM

nevermind


um... okay:tongue:

neveragain's photo
Tue 12/18/07 11:31 AM
just couldnt find the words... its wonderful