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so late at night
i found new ways of speaking i see my little story now peeking, i sit here and spin some lullaby comb my fingers through your hair wish that i would die, oh - just like this, with you at my side just like this, where you still love my eyes and, no, i cannot see what the hell you're doing to me i wonder if Ive still got it i wonder if you've still got me shake, nod strain hard to focus my eyes on you you breathe so slowly dead with every exhale your lips so simple id shake them back to life and yes you were the lively one, i know i talk to you now, like i don't know how to show this little birdy told me a wonderful tale full of you and i and now i see just what you're doin' to me i want to cry i want my tears to wake you from my lap i want to shake you and make you see me You know, Ive been here all along Ive traded my song for your love to be gone so now you know...your waking mind wont show it and when you wake, ill be gone without you so don't you fret don't you worry those delicate eyes don't you wrinkle that soft forehead don't you pout your simple lips, cause i still love you even if its an accident so don't ever turn your head too fast you might see me there, watching you with streetlight simplicity. |
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very nice
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thanks sweetiepie. this one had a lot of meaning to me, at one point.
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thanks sweetiepie. this one had a lot of meaning to me, at one point. Awwww but the words and the meaning still come through very good write |
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Great writing, shows that nothing's ever simple, even things that should make us happy...but isn't it great to feel?
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very nice
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thanks pkd.
reading old stuff is fun; i get insights into how i was feeling back then, things i didnt understand then because i was too busy experience it. this was about my ex-fiance. in a lot of ways, things were perfect; but things that were out of our control made it too hard to happen. that, and bad choices on her part. eh. what can you do. :D thanks pkh. |
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Even your old stuff is very good!
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thanks much teddybear.
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awesome!
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why thank you.
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