Topic: Tonight I Can Cry
Sidharth_09's photo
Thu 03/08/18 10:33 AM
Within me, I have held my tears
Pretending a fake smile, for years.
But, under the starlight sky
In peace, tonight I can cry.

Carrying, the weight of the world on my shoulder
Even in pain, I didn't lose my composure
But tonight, tears flow from my eye
In peace, tonight I can cry.

I wipe everyone's tears
Within me, I carry their fears.
But, none witnesses my helplessness, nothing they hear
For I cry alone when none is near.

I unleash the sorrow, that I had caged
Sky cries with me, it begins to rain.
The raindrops, hide my tears of pain
But scars of sadness still remain, the same.

Shedding tears alone, I realize
People depend on me, I'm their pride.
For their smiles, I can't afford to cry
So in tonight's darkness, my tears I hide.

The dawn breaks, the sun begins to shine
I wear the crown of thorns, that's mine.
Wiping tears, for my loved ones, I rise
For my tears, aren't meant for others' eyes.

Sidharth_09's photo
Thu 03/08/18 10:58 AM
Thank you so much for a positive feedback, I joined this website today. I truly feel welcomed by your kind words. Thank you for taking out the time to go through this poem of mine.

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Thu 03/08/18 12:39 PM
:thumbsup:

Sidharth_09's photo
Fri 03/09/18 10:41 AM
Thank you so much :relaxed:

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Fri 03/09/18 11:21 AM
Beautifully written...

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Fri 03/09/18 11:28 AM
:thumbsup:

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Fri 03/09/18 09:19 PM
Such a wonderful poem, something most of us can relate to. Glad i read this.

Sidharth_09's photo
Sun 03/11/18 01:11 AM
:thumbsup:
thank you I'm glad you liked the poem :relaxed:

Sidharth_09's photo
Sun 03/11/18 01:11 AM
Beautifully written...
I'm delighted to know that you found this poem beautiful :relaxed:

Sidharth_09's photo
Sun 03/11/18 01:13 AM
Such a wonderful poem, something most of us can relate to. Glad i read this.

Thanks for such a positive feedback. I try to write about things that most of experience but aren't able to express often. I'm really pleased that you were able to relate with my words

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Fri 12/13/19 12:13 AM
beautiful...

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Fri 12/13/19 01:49 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

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Thu 12/19/19 08:13 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely poem, Sidharth_09 flowerforyou
thanks for sharing

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Fri 12/27/19 08:23 PM
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