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POEM: Lost Souls
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Thank you I'm glad you liked it, it's only in the grip of darkness when a star shines in its prime splendor
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POEM: Lost Souls
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If you are interested in reading more of my writings you are more than welcome to visit my blog : www.writingrhymes.wordpress.com ; I'll be posting more of my poems in this forum in the near future Thank you for your support
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Topic:
POEM: Lost Souls
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Thank you so much for your readership and heart-warming response
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Topic:
POEM: Lost Souls
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Thank you glad you liked it, posting my poems here after quite a while.. Thank you so much for your readership and heart-warming response
So very beautiful thank you for sharing |
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POEM: Lost Souls
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On a mystic night that was terrifyingly profound
While I sat in the darkness with none around. As the howling winds whispered with a lullaby sound I felt your lost soul lurking in the background. Wild thoughts in my head began to race In my darkness, I craved the bliss of your grace. Desperately, I yearned to see your beautiful face Anxiously! I wanted to feel the warmth of your embrace. As my imagination escaped my life's logical shore I envisioned the times we shared before. With my hopeful heart as I opened the door I was greeted by pain, loneliness & nothing more. Even tonight as my horrifying hallucination begins to fly Tears of blood stream down from my eye. Bitterly I weep, madly I cry As helplessly I see your illusion burn & die. But neither the devil below nor the God sitting above None can corupt the purity of our love. My heart breathes the name of our immortal love & my lost soul shall find you my darling dove. Perhaps wandering beyond the boundaries of day & night Surpassing the arguments of wrong & right. Overcoming the feeling of agony & delight Someday, my love, our lost souls will again unite. |
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Destroyed In Your Love
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Some of it related to my ex.. however nicely said... thank you glad you liked it |
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Destroyed In Your Love
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Yea I tried to create alliteration with the satanic spell & by doing so wanted to portray the manipulator as an embodiment of an evil figure, but I respect your feedback. Thank you for your readership, the honesty & the kindness of your feedback.
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Destroyed In Your Love
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Thanks I'm glad you liked it
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Destroyed In Your Love
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Reminiscent, I recall the times we had
When I felt, your comforting hands. When your eyes, shined with love for me When your love, was deeper than the sea. When it seemed you completed my life When I regarded you as my paradise. But, blinded in love, I didn’t realize That even you, had a wicked side. I still remember, that disturbing day That day… when you drew away. Shattered, my life was in a disarray Coldly, we parted, on our separate ways. I miss, your comforting hands But, you need space, I understand. I aspire, that love in your eyes But, I guess all that was lies. Even Adam, wouldn’t have cried on being banished, from the paradise. The way, tears of blood, I cried Upon loosing you… My paradise. You left me, with my fears You gifted my eyes, many tears. Still I hope, you smile for years For I value, your smile more than my tears. You tricked me, in your satanic spell Yet for your future, I wish you well. For I can’t hate you, my darling dove Even if, I get destroyed in your love. |
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The Peacock
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Walking outside on a depressing day
Carrying my broken hopes in disarray. Under the sky that was ominously grey I sensed a storm was on it’s way. As my feet were turning back in retreat I saw a peacock walking in-front of me. Seeing the graceful bird was a visual treat I stood there as my heart melted in ecstasy. The peacock looked at the sky There was a thrill in the peacock’s eye. In rain, peacock opened it’s colorful feathers Peacock’s grace bloomed in the hostile weather. Rain’s wrath tried to intimidate the bird But rain’s rage was what the bird preferred. To the rain’s beat the peacock danced With the raging rain the peacock romanced. Gradually the weather started to transform Peacock’s grace had conquered the storm. Peacock gloriously glittered & glowed & out of the darkness came a rainbow. Mystically to me the peacock explained That confronting life’s storm our hopes break. But every storm does run out of rain & with time our pain does fade away. In life’s storm we mustn’t retreat or cry we mustn’t wait for the storm to pass-by. Instead we must dance in the eye of storm With fortitude we should beautifully transform. Even if the storm is menacingly dark We must possess a hopeful heart. So that like the peacock, we too glow & amidst life’s darkness create a rainbow. |
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Twin Flame
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Thank you all for your kind words I'm delighted to know that my words could move you. Your generosity has brought a smile on my face. ️ ️
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Twin Flame
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None knew, his traumatic troubles
None understood, his emotional struggles. For he was a cold lone heart A pale ignored loner, from the start. She was an angel from the sky Her beauty was a treat for every eye. She glided like a beautiful butterfly From her blazing aura, surroundings got purified. It was a fairytale night The angel’s beauty was in its prime. Angel dazzled, in the loner’s eye Lost in the moment, he was mesmerized. Violins played, cupids playfully conspired Seeing her, his heart conceived love’s fire. To melt in her soul, was his desire To be her’s, is what he aspired. Loner never had love, he was deprived So he was hesitant & awkwardly shy. Angel sensed purity, in loner’s teary eyes Warmly, she hugged him, the loner smiled. Their bond, wasn’t a one night affair Their feelings, never died in thin air. For each other’s smile, they mutually cared Their bond, was majestically rare. Their flame of love, remained the same Passion, still runs wild in their veins. Their hearts still breathe, each other’s name For they are, each other’s twin flame. |
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A Quiet Man's Parasite
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I enjoyed reading your poem Sidharth. So nicely written. So emotional. Thank you so much for your beautiful compliment, your kind words made my day |
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A Quiet Man's Parasite
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A Quiet Man's Parasite
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You’re a fantastic writer A writer is an insignificant entity without the reader. Thanks for reading the poem truly humbled by your generosity |
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A Quiet Man's Parasite
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Wow, I love it. Very powerful and inspirational, especially for those who have walked in those shoes.
Yes in life we all face the same devils at different levels. Thank you for your glorious praise I'm delighted to know that you liked this post. Thanks for sharing! |
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A Quiet Man's Parasite
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Another great read Sidharth! Thank you for sharing Thank you for reading I'm glad you liked the poem. |
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A Quiet Man's Parasite
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Forgive, but never forget. True friends/family you will know them by their actions.
Sad reality is better than a happy illusion, because its not fake. Truly grateful for your concern, life has been a bit tough for me but I've learnt to celebrate my sadness by decorating my darkness in the form of my rhymes. Thank you so much taking out the time to go through my poem. Sad poem,I hope you find kinder people to enjoy life with soon. |
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A Quiet Man's Parasite
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Great Poem Sidharth!
Thanks Rob glad you liked the dual nature of my writings.. Most of my poems do start on a dark note ( because I believe that if the emotions are true and raw then something splendid can be crafted out of our darkness) and end on a positive / hope note. Thank you for your readership and support . I love the duality of the subject.... tortured yet becoming free! Most moving and memorable...Please continue...This is food for the soul. Your friend Rob |
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A Quiet Man's Parasite
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Will they....forever miss? Been a few years, but they are all gone. I have the power and their drama is all gone.
whether they shall miss it forever or not depends on whether or not you serve your heart out to them to feast on... So guess that does depend on person to person. Thank you for your readership. I'm glad you could relate with my poem. ️Totally relate. Thanks for sharing. |
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