it drags on

yeah

the mistake i made it

drags on

yeah yeah

you

sound like

will

iam

shat

ner

please

please please

for the love of

god

dont you


ever


write anything


like

that again

lmfao im j/k but seriously though please, that is not poetry nor a quote nor anything closely resembling either or.

and if thats a song, im going to cut my ears off, no wonder ive never heard of the artist lmao

frustration
and
weariness
and
darkness
and
sunrise

who? the person i'm wondering is reading my post and feeling the compulsion to reply twice

there's no accounting for taste or style i suggest

yep, that's more like it

raw

might i reply in kind!

http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/54842

lyrical poetry is fun. \o/

well one might say

move on move on

down the road you go

critic your not

so move on move on

down the road you go



ako keep on keeping on there are ones with knowledgeable minds here that we can read between the lines for we have the minds to know that poetry is what is from the heart and comes in many different styles. good one.

sorry could not help myself the made me do it lmao

this was in reference to the ex, not that it matters, why keep whining ya know. so i stayed off the relationship forum, watered it down and dealt with it and i'm still free or something like that.

well thank you txs gal

though i was merely offended by the screenname

my opinion, that was a generic piece of crap, anyone can throw together a few words and call it poetic, but it takes more then that to be able to call it anything more than generic. you need to speak as if your tongue was made of honey if you want your "bee's" to gather. 13 words, 3 of which the same does not constitute being anything more then generic. if you wanted to paint a picture of your soul would you use just red, blue, and green, or would you use every color that you could imagine? if its something that comes from the heart it should say something dramatic, not plain. it makes my head go numb to think of all the talent being wasted because people just spit out a few words and put no effort into it. and yes i do read in between the lines,i knew what it meant, even though it was a broken jumble of words. and it truthfully reminded me of william shatner speaking, with the layout and all.

and in reference to my screen name if you are to look at my profile you would see that i plainly state all of my intentions in full, i have not been told anything from a site admin about my name being not allowed, so all i can tell you is deal with it , because im not changing it. hell i've seen worse here.

and the double post in the first place was a mere mistake, it was supposed to be one, but i accidently sent it through pre-maturely.

Hmmmmmmm....... so if he wants our opinion I guess he'll give it to us? Kewl! Means we can join the mindless mass of existence drones, kick our heels and stumble thru until our next direction is given. DUH!

See? The mistake you made is thinking for yourself!

Love ya..... just the way ya are!

Hmmm I understood it and would also call it poetry. So I guess I like certain "crap", what I don't like is close minded people. I can also express with few words, get my point across, still call it poetry AND do it with my heart and soul...

thanks y'all for making this one fun


some actually like it short and sweet

aged to perfection

probably for those only already enjoying an interconnectedness with ak0

"interconnectedness" is something i do enjoy.....

i do also



also, anyone really wanna/need to read a long drawn process on mistakes

anyone?

you pay, there's a domino effect, you will live it out the rest of yer life is all make waves around it

or at least that was my take, be careful in reckless ways if that can at all be managed at some point in time