The night so cold yet i'm on fire
So tight you hold me, kiss me lover
Taste the fire of my burning lips
Feel the flame in my fingertips
My passion burns aflame for you
My want you cannot tame for you
Nails gently raking on your skin
As my blue eyes drink you in
Want to taste you every inch
Take my time leave none to waste
My lover leave me with your taste
With just a touch i shiver and quake
Your hands upon me oh how i ache
Your lips so soft upon my skin
Your lips so..mmm..again and again
Your touch it burns a glorious flame
writhing and wanting.....
I'm calling you name
Take me now lover
Again and again

Great job, but now I have a heated desire for hot passionate love... NOW !!!

I feel the warmth even through the cold night
I held her as she had never been held
I came close to her lips before a kiss, a pause, a last look
I picked up her hand and held it close to me
The intense feelings abound and yet confuse
My shirt ripped down the middle
Marks on my skin
Her ice blue eyes could see through me
They brought me in further to where I had not been before
Her kiss ran wild, making my breath faint
Slow agony yet fullfillment, more
I lift her head to place a kiss
Her hand upon my hand, upon her chest
She shuttered and leaned back as she felt her body intense
I grabbed her hair and pulled her back
Let her know she was a part of my fate
Destiny burns burns on her lips
A kiss so intense it burns like flame
She screams my name
She is Mine, I am Hers
Again, Again

thanks for reading
and your poem is nice also uwanna
may i ask why you wrote kinda a response poem to mine?

Well what do you do when your inspired? I couldn't just keep that all in and sleep with it. That would keep me up all night.

btw: Can you get the neosporin cause I've got to take care of these gentle marks you left from the last rhythms you wrote.

John

very sensual in a nice and touchy wording indeed, good job sugar

Very, very nice SugarJen.