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Topic: The Peach I Picked.....
Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 11/01/07 09:48 PM
Here's one I wrote on a whim just by the given title...It was supposed to be song titles that never got a song. Well I took the title and I made a song to go with it...here it is. It's a silly one.

The Peach I Picked in Georgia, Didn't Cling to Me Long.

The cherry I picked in Washington
Was a sweet surprise,
The orange in California
Was a sight for sore eyes.
Something could be said
For the watermelon queen,
She was far more shapely
Than others I have seen.
Now they are all beautiful
Don't get me wrong,
But the peach I picked in Georgia
Didn't cling to me long.

(Chorus)
She was a redneck floozy
Sittin in my jacuzzi,
Suppin on her bottle of gin,
Cusses like a sailor
Living in a trailer
I don't want her back again.

My Mississippi Delta queen
Was a gamblers pick,
My Ozark baby doll
Wasn't quite the hick.
My Hawaiian pineapple
Was a sweet little tart,
She could've been the
One that stole my heart.
My little buckeye from Ohio
Sang a beautiful song,
But the peach I picked in Georgia
Didn't cling to me long.

I'll take all the fruit
That follows in suit,
But a peach will have to be excused,
She won't work a lick,
She's just a country hick,
I feel like I've been abused.

LAMom's photo
Thu 11/01/07 10:31 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

I so enjoy

soundedmind's photo
Thu 11/01/07 10:46 PM
Woohoo!

Me loves!

:heart:

Wolfeyes58's photo
Fri 11/02/07 12:03 PM
Anybody know someone that could put music to that and make it a country song? It might be a hit...never know.

songstress1's photo
Tue 11/20/07 07:12 AM
OMG!!! I love this one,, I would like to copy it if it is ok and send it to my friend in Nashville to see what he thinks. Let me know.

pkh's photo
Tue 11/20/07 07:18 AM
that was awesome,I'd post in general and asked I know there are a few musicians on here

Noden's photo
Tue 11/20/07 07:26 AM
Per: Wolfeyes, has given me permission to let you know you can copy and send this poem to your friend in Nashville, refering to: Songstress1, and Wolfeyes, also wants you to know that he wil get back to you as soon as possible...


He is very excited, to recieve this message, but due to writing a book, he is taking some time away from the monitor to get relief...

Thank Songstress for your interested looking forward to the outcome....flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 11/20/07 11:37 AM
You have my permission Song to copy it and let him do what he feels he needs to do with it. If it becomes a hit at least I know I will have one song out there that became a hit.

songstress1's photo
Wed 11/28/07 06:47 AM
How bout a songbird instead?smooched

peachiegirl28's photo
Wed 11/28/07 06:48 AM
:heart: itflowerforyou

<---------peachlaugh laugh laugh

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 11/28/07 07:09 AM
A songbird would be great...

Thanks peachie...glad you liked it.

no photo
Wed 11/28/07 11:39 AM

Here's one I wrote on a whim just by the given title...It was supposed to be song titles that never got a song. Well I took the title and I made a song to go with it...here it is. It's a silly one.

The Peach I Picked in Georgia, Didn't Cling to Me Long.

The cherry I picked in Washington
Was a sweet surprise,
The orange in California
Was a sight for sore eyes.
Something could be said
For the watermelon queen,
She was far more shapely
Than others I have seen.
Now they are all beautiful
Don't get me wrong,
But the peach I picked in Georgia
Didn't cling to me long.

(Chorus)
She was a redneck floozy
Sittin in my jacuzzi,
Suppin on her bottle of gin,
Cusses like a sailor
Living in a trailer
I don't want her back again.

My Mississippi Delta queen
Was a gamblers pick,
My Ozark baby doll
Wasn't quite the hick.
My Hawaiian pineapple
Was a sweet little tart,
She could've been the
One that stole my heart.
My little buckeye from Ohio
Sang a beautiful song,
But the peach I picked in Georgia
Didn't cling to me long.

I'll take all the fruit
That follows in suit,
But a peach will have to be excused,
She won't work a lick,
She's just a country hick,
I feel like I've been abused.


LMAO!!! EXCELLENT!!!! laugh :heart: flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 11/28/07 12:11 PM
Hehehehe loved it Hummm good one for Toby Keith to sing bigsmile

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 11/28/07 03:48 PM
Thanks Kristi...do you know how to get in touch with him?

no photo
Wed 11/28/07 04:16 PM
wow that great, I would love to hear that as a song even if i don't like country much. :D

Noden's photo
Wed 11/28/07 04:16 PM
Edited by Noden on Wed 11/28/07 04:17 PM

Thanks Kristi...do you know how to get in touch with him?




If anybody knows she does, Nice Pic.........WOW!!!

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 11/28/07 04:21 PM
I wonder who sent it to me..???? HMmmmmm....a sweet but loving friend who knows I love wolves...someone who is understanding...and someone I know that is my dearest friend...Who can that be?

Noden's photo
Wed 11/28/07 04:33 PM
Me....are ya saying little old me.....bigsmile blushing

I am so glad to have met you, alway's hold your friendship dear....flowerforyou smokin

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 11/28/07 04:43 PM
Give her a Scooby snack Scoobs...I think she got it. I will treasure our friendship too.

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 11/28/07 04:52 PM
Gawd wish I did shshshssh heck would jump his bones anyday eheheheheh but hey might be able to google him and well get it copy writed first then see that way but get your claws on it first ya know what I meanbigsmile

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