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Here's one I wrote on a whim just by the given title...It was supposed to be song titles that never got a song. Well I took the title and I made a song to go with it...here it is. It's a silly one.
The Peach I Picked in Georgia, Didn't Cling to Me Long. The cherry I picked in Washington Was a sweet surprise, The orange in California Was a sight for sore eyes. Something could be said For the watermelon queen, She was far more shapely Than others I have seen. Now they are all beautiful Don't get me wrong, But the peach I picked in Georgia Didn't cling to me long. (Chorus) She was a redneck floozy Sittin in my jacuzzi, Suppin on her bottle of gin, Cusses like a sailor Living in a trailer I don't want her back again. My Mississippi Delta queen Was a gamblers pick, My Ozark baby doll Wasn't quite the hick. My Hawaiian pineapple Was a sweet little tart, She could've been the One that stole my heart. My little buckeye from Ohio Sang a beautiful song, But the peach I picked in Georgia Didn't cling to me long. I'll take all the fruit That follows in suit, But a peach will have to be excused, She won't work a lick, She's just a country hick, I feel like I've been abused. |
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I so enjoy |
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Woohoo!
Me loves! |
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Anybody know someone that could put music to that and make it a country song? It might be a hit...never know.
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OMG!!! I love this one,, I would like to copy it if it is ok and send it to my friend in Nashville to see what he thinks. Let me know.
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that was awesome,I'd post in general and asked I know there are a few musicians on here
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Per: Wolfeyes, has given me permission to let you know you can copy and send this poem to your friend in Nashville, refering to: Songstress1, and Wolfeyes, also wants you to know that he wil get back to you as soon as possible...
He is very excited, to recieve this message, but due to writing a book, he is taking some time away from the monitor to get relief... Thank Songstress for your interested looking forward to the outcome.... |
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You have my permission Song to copy it and let him do what he feels he needs to do with it. If it becomes a hit at least I know I will have one song out there that became a hit.
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How bout a songbird instead?
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A songbird would be great...
Thanks peachie...glad you liked it. |
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Here's one I wrote on a whim just by the given title...It was supposed to be song titles that never got a song. Well I took the title and I made a song to go with it...here it is. It's a silly one. The Peach I Picked in Georgia, Didn't Cling to Me Long. The cherry I picked in Washington Was a sweet surprise, The orange in California Was a sight for sore eyes. Something could be said For the watermelon queen, She was far more shapely Than others I have seen. Now they are all beautiful Don't get me wrong, But the peach I picked in Georgia Didn't cling to me long. (Chorus) She was a redneck floozy Sittin in my jacuzzi, Suppin on her bottle of gin, Cusses like a sailor Living in a trailer I don't want her back again. My Mississippi Delta queen Was a gamblers pick, My Ozark baby doll Wasn't quite the hick. My Hawaiian pineapple Was a sweet little tart, She could've been the One that stole my heart. My little buckeye from Ohio Sang a beautiful song, But the peach I picked in Georgia Didn't cling to me long. I'll take all the fruit That follows in suit, But a peach will have to be excused, She won't work a lick, She's just a country hick, I feel like I've been abused. LMAO!!! EXCELLENT!!!! |
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Hehehehe loved it Hummm good one for Toby Keith to sing
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Thanks Kristi...do you know how to get in touch with him?
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wow that great, I would love to hear that as a song even if i don't like country much. :D
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Edited by
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Wed 11/28/07 04:17 PM
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Thanks Kristi...do you know how to get in touch with him? If anybody knows she does, Nice Pic.........WOW!!! |
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I wonder who sent it to me..???? HMmmmmm....a sweet but loving friend who knows I love wolves...someone who is understanding...and someone I know that is my dearest friend...Who can that be?
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Me....are ya saying little old me.....
I am so glad to have met you, alway's hold your friendship dear.... |
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Give her a Scooby snack Scoobs...I think she got it. I will treasure our friendship too.
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Gawd wish I did shshshssh heck would jump his bones anyday eheheheheh but hey might be able to google him and well get it copy writed first then see that way but get your claws on it first ya know what I mean
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