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Topic: in my dreams
just_mary Joined Fri 09/28/07 Posts: 169	Mon 10/29/07 07:28 PM
In my dreams, I walk along a brook Winding through the beautiful woods Everywhere I can look There is beauty in these woods Birds are singing, flowers blooming When it brings me to a waterfall Through the mists I see a rainbow This is most beautiful of all As I watch the waters flow I hate to wake up at all

brian325 Joined Fri 10/05/07 Posts: 4132	Mon 10/29/07 07:33 PM
Why would someone vote to delete this? I'm sorry Mary, your poems are beautiful!

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Mon 10/29/07 07:35 PM
I agree

massagetrade Joined Thu 02/22/07 Posts: 8505	Mon 10/29/07 09:31 PM
I don't see a duplicate, I guess the other copy was already deleted? <--- voting to keep

just_mary Joined Fri 09/28/07 Posts: 169	Mon 10/29/07 09:49 PM
thank you missed the whole dup thing but appreciate your kind words

fredwood28 Joined Fri 04/13/07 Posts: 304	Mon 10/29/07 10:13 PM
i like this one

no_psychos_please Joined Sat 07/21/07 Posts: 1131	Mon 10/29/07 10:19 PM
Did we bring a picnic lunch? I can pause here a while

just_mary Joined Fri 09/28/07 Posts: 169	Mon 10/29/07 10:30 PM
how you tease but I love picnics

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76392	Tue 10/30/07 03:57 AM
very good

olderthanilook Joined Mon 10/15/07 Posts: 17	Tue 10/30/07 04:38 PM
A very comfortable poem. cheers!!!

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