Topic: The Rose Poem
UsernameOneFiveOne's photo
Tue 10/23/07 08:45 AM

When in the first
Moments
Of a new days
Beginning
The rose
Gazes at the
Sight through
A sleepy eye
And elegantly tastes
The morning dew
As it begins to
Blossom
Under the
Approaching light
Of day
It is a sight
To behold
Every time your
Beauty fills
My sight and
My mind and
My heart
I recall
The rose and
The morning that I
Was privileged
To lay nearby
And share
This intimate
Moment
©MM

LAMom's photo
Tue 10/23/07 08:46 AM
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pkh's photo
Tue 10/23/07 08:47 AM
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MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 10/23/07 08:53 AM
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ColleenAnn's photo
Tue 10/23/07 08:56 AM
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LightVoice's photo
Tue 10/23/07 09:51 AM
oooooooohhhhh ~ VERY nice flowerforyou :smile: flowerforyou

bluebell's photo
Tue 10/23/07 09:54 AM
Very nice thanks for sharing

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 10/23/07 10:00 AM
Beautifulbigsmile flowerforyou

UsernameOneFiveOne's photo
Tue 10/23/07 10:03 AM
Wow, thank you everyone! You are all so sweet I feel like a candyman

Mike

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 10/23/07 10:15 AM
laugh laugh laugh ahehehehehhe Mike you will find out you just stumbled into a brand new world here at JSH the poetry section we keep out the drama unless it is wrote upon the page as poetry. The ones that write in here for the most part also read the others and leave there responses of how ever they feel about the poems etc.. More of a family thing.

Welcome to the site so far what I have read have been very good hope to see you posting and enjoying the friends you will end up meeting here lots of great people here.bigsmile

















Hummm heheheheh got any snickers, baby ruths lol humm well said ya felt like the candy man laugh laugh laugh laugh bigsmile flowerforyou

UsernameOneFiveOne's photo
Tue 10/23/07 11:29 AM
Could be a sweet tooth coming on later today, stay tuned...