Topic: “Only if you Try”
TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 10/21/07 09:35 PM

“Only if you Try”



As I sit here day after day.
Wonder if anyone will come my way.
Soon that passes past my mind.
After thinking about it I remind.
Myself why should I even care?
Or even try to dare.
Does it really even matter?
It is only on the computer.
What each person does any more.
It’s just a way to explore.
And to have some fun
After all was said and done.
Who is to say who will win?
Words at times will make your head spin.
Round and round till you’re lost.
Do we really want to pay that cost?
I think I’m better off not going there.
It seems to only bring despair.
Some will get lucky and find that one.
Then there search is done.
And down the road they can go.
For they all know.
They got what they came for.
And not looking for anymore.
Those are the ones that were blessed.
Actually I’m pretty impressed.
They found love and it began to grow.
So see who really will know.
Do these things actually last?
And not follow the routine of the past.
Well guess if you never try.
You want have to worry about a reply.


K.L.M.

10/21/2007


SomebodyinChico's photo
Sun 10/21/07 10:16 PM
Very good, except for at least one typo. But too lenghty for most legit contest. Keep up the good work, kid!

no photo
Sun 10/21/07 10:34 PM
Very true
Wonderful words as always TxsGalflowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Mon 10/22/07 07:42 AM
((( Puddin Cup )))))

Hugs my sweet sister, your words again touch my heart,, you inspire me,,,, Love you :heart: :heart: :heart:

no_psychos_please's photo
Mon 10/22/07 08:09 AM
If at first you don't succeed......

(((Kristi))) you are a great treasure that is not so easily won. One day, hopefully soon :wink: , we will all be blessed by the joy of your discovery, for your wealth and friendship is immeasurable! :heart: :heart:

Love you dear sweet lady! flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou smooched

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 10/22/07 08:24 AM
I couldn't have said any better than NPP...way to go with that one...it could be in reverse for man or woman. It doesn't matter for the length anyways, you're not on here for contests.

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 10/22/07 09:46 AM
SomebodyinChico thank you for the keep up the good workflowerforyou but as for not right for a contest, heeheheh I'm don't write for contest I write cause I now seem to have that need to and because of the ones right here on these forums they are my encourgemet that I need. Honest if I did write for contest hey they either take me as I'm or they don't need my words upon the page. As far as length I stop when it feels right to me. But thank you for the advice anyway.bigsmile

((((((((Chris))))))) thank you bigsmile

(((((((Buttercup))))))) love ya girlfriendbigsmile :heart: bigsmile


NPP :heart: bigsmile ya just way too sweet my friend and yet you are another that has found that path paved with love follow your heart and let your mind guide you. bigsmile :heart: bigsmile

Wolfeyes58 bigsmile awww your too kind thank you for your words and yeah your right for I'm not here to compet against anyone except myself. Does not matter I have seen poems with only 5 lines that had more power kick to them that was Awesome. bigsmile

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 10/22/07 11:11 AM
flowerforyou happy flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 10/23/07 10:23 AM
Thank you MsTeddyflowerforyou

pkh's photo
Tue 10/23/07 11:42 AM
beautiful sweetie if not for you I might have chicken out you gave me encouragement so now will see what happenes...but I'm so grateful for your help and smiles and laughter,you are an awesome lady and I love who you are and cherish your friendshipflowerforyou

lovemaekar's photo
Wed 10/24/07 02:01 AM
God, I don't know how you do it. But, sweetie your really good.

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 10/24/07 02:30 AM
Pam girl no matter what you think I did for you it was always right there in your heart all you needed was to be reminded you could do it and it was the right thing to do. bigsmile flowerforyou bigsmile


Lovemaekar your words upon the page always brings a smile to my face and warms my heart to the core. How do I do it all I can say to that is I write the words that come from deep within my heart and what stirs my soul. Actually kind of wild for as I look upon a blank page. Either before or after I will think of only the first sentence of what to start it with then I just go off of it the rest seems to just fall in. bigsmile again thank you very muchflowerforyou