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“Only if you Try” As I sit here day after day. Wonder if anyone will come my way. Soon that passes past my mind. After thinking about it I remind. Myself why should I even care? Or even try to dare. Does it really even matter? It is only on the computer. What each person does any more. It’s just a way to explore. And to have some fun After all was said and done. Who is to say who will win? Words at times will make your head spin. Round and round till you’re lost. Do we really want to pay that cost? I think I’m better off not going there. It seems to only bring despair. Some will get lucky and find that one. Then there search is done. And down the road they can go. For they all know. They got what they came for. And not looking for anymore. Those are the ones that were blessed. Actually I’m pretty impressed. They found love and it began to grow. So see who really will know. Do these things actually last? And not follow the routine of the past. Well guess if you never try. You want have to worry about a reply. K.L.M. 10/21/2007 |
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Very good, except for at least one typo. But too lenghty for most legit contest. Keep up the good work, kid!
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Very true
Wonderful words as always TxsGal |
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((( Puddin Cup )))))
Hugs my sweet sister, your words again touch my heart,, you inspire me,,,, Love you |
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If at first you don't succeed......
(((Kristi))) you are a great treasure that is not so easily won. One day, hopefully soon , we will all be blessed by the joy of your discovery, for your wealth and friendship is immeasurable! Love you dear sweet lady! |
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I couldn't have said any better than NPP...way to go with that one...it could be in reverse for man or woman. It doesn't matter for the length anyways, you're not on here for contests.
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SomebodyinChico thank you for the keep up the good work but as for not right for a contest, heeheheh I'm don't write for contest I write cause I now seem to have that need to and because of the ones right here on these forums they are my encourgemet that I need. Honest if I did write for contest hey they either take me as I'm or they don't need my words upon the page. As far as length I stop when it feels right to me. But thank you for the advice anyway.
((((((((Chris))))))) thank you (((((((Buttercup))))))) love ya girlfriend NPP ya just way too sweet my friend and yet you are another that has found that path paved with love follow your heart and let your mind guide you. Wolfeyes58 awww your too kind thank you for your words and yeah your right for I'm not here to compet against anyone except myself. Does not matter I have seen poems with only 5 lines that had more power kick to them that was Awesome. |
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Thank you MsTeddy
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beautiful sweetie if not for you I might have chicken out you gave me encouragement so now will see what happenes...but I'm so grateful for your help and smiles and laughter,you are an awesome lady and I love who you are and cherish your friendship
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God, I don't know how you do it. But, sweetie your really good.
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Pam girl no matter what you think I did for you it was always right there in your heart all you needed was to be reminded you could do it and it was the right thing to do.
Lovemaekar your words upon the page always brings a smile to my face and warms my heart to the core. How do I do it all I can say to that is I write the words that come from deep within my heart and what stirs my soul. Actually kind of wild for as I look upon a blank page. Either before or after I will think of only the first sentence of what to start it with then I just go off of it the rest seems to just fall in. again thank you very much |
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