Topic: “Lost in the Moment” | |
---|---|
“Lost in the Moment”
I want to know how it feels. Just to be head over heels. And feel that very touch. The one you will miss so much. In the morning that soft kiss. That will leave you bliss. Their scent upon the pillow you hold. Thoughts of them are uncontrolled. Waiting for that moment they will be there instead. Thinking of the words this morning they said. That made you feel all warm inside. Knowing soon again you will be side by side. It’s the little things during the day. That will send your thoughts their way. Maybe it will be something they had said. When you were in there arms all safe in the bed. Or how it felt as their soft lips touched your skin. That made the embers once again start to burn within. Maybe the I Love You note they left behind. Right were they were sure you would find. And a smile it would bring to your face. Holding the note in your hands and this moment you embrace. Knowing this is how love is supposed to be. Thinking thoughts of love and the moment you get to see. Them, as they walk towards you and the look in their eyes. Within their heart straight to the soul the heat starts to rise. Once again the passion takes over as two bodies become one. Lost in time and the moment way past the setting of the sun. Being within the arms of the one you love this way. There is no doubt you are right were you want to stay. Right within these arms feeling this love forever and a day. K.L.M 10/16/2007 |
|
|
|
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yessssssssssss such an incredible feeling it is,,, Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa your reading my thoughts today,,, Love you so much,, and yes my sister the day will come and you too will feel and see love within your soul,,,,,,
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
|
|
what a beautiful poem! u sure have talent!
Becca ![]() |
|
|
|
What a wonderful expression of a feeling.
You're so talented (and I'm so jealous!). |
|
|
|
Awww Txs... very nice poem.
![]() |
|
|
|
very pretty poem
ty for sharing |
|
|
|
((((((((Buttercup))))))))
![]() ![]() beccalee1980 thank you so much for your kind words ![]() Pete026 Awwwww ya just too sweet but jealous ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Mystique42 awwww thank you very much ![]() meandu2 your very welcome thank you for reading & welcome to the site ![]() |
|
|
|
TxsGal3333, I can't believe you've only been writing poems for a year. You're a natural!
Keep up the excellent work! |
|
|
|
(((Kristi))) there's always two arms here with a big hug for ya!
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
|
|
Awwww but it is so funny I had only wrote 3-4 before I came to this site a year ago. Actually Poetry was not my cup of tea to read lmao now give me the gory fiction or action packed book and you had my attention.
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Well then I stumbled onto a few of the Poet's here that had me in awww from the word go. ChubnyCherubPoet which I'm sure you have read her poems if not your missing out big time. The more I read the more I got hooked and with CCP,Jim, SCG and a few others I decided to give it a try. Well I did and yeppiers I'm still here. To me it is something now I enjoy doing. Ohhh and of course the responses are awesome and that is what gives the extra push to keep writing my words upon these pages. ![]() ![]() ![]() So I thank you from my heart, you and a few others today has truly put a smile upon my face today. ![]() |
|
|
|
I'll admit not all poetry does it for me, but I like what I like (if that makes sense). And yeah, I like CCP's work and no_psychos_please (sorry, don't know your real name!)too. I'm still getting to know the cool poets on here, so no offence to anyone I haven't mentioned by name.
:) |
|
|
|
![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
|
|
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Your an inspiration my friend....thanks for the beautiful read. |
|
|
|
(((Krist))) love is the best feeling in the world...beautifully written...thanks for sharing
![]() ![]() |
|
|
|
NPP ya too sweet Hugggzz to ya also
Pete don't worry about it in time you will get to know them all ![]() MsTeddy ![]() feralatlady awww your way too kind thank you ![]() blonderockermom hummm yeah I do faintly remember those days ![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
|
|
I guess your making up for all the years wasted not writing the feelings inside. I am very happy you decided to show us what it is to be honest within. I still wonder from time to time when you will find the happiness some of us have found.
Your my favorite texan, and always will be. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() G |
|
|
|
Awwww Craig ya are just to kind my friend. Maybe someday that time will come for me. But even it if don't I'm blessed to see and watch all those that have found there love.
![]() ![]() ![]() |
|
|
|
beautiful Kristi forever and a day
![]() |
|
|
|
pkh thank you girl humm yeah would that not be sweet
![]() |
|
|
|
How do you come up with such beautiful words every single day?
![]() |
|
|