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Topic: work in progress
fredwood28 Joined Fri 04/13/07 Posts: 304	Mon 10/08/07 08:00 AM
As I lay here throwing up blood Relizing my time is coming to an end I see the bright light ahead As I get closer it gets dimmer I get to it and its just a little ball of light That says your not good enough for me And it disapears into the darkness Leaving me to die in a pool of blood FRLW 10/08/07

KentClark123 Joined Sat 09/15/07 Posts: 136	Mon 10/08/07 08:03 AM
Damn Fred where did that come from?

traviscooper Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 125	Mon 10/08/07 08:04 AM
Good one Fred but I hope you start feeling better soon man

KentClark123 Joined Sat 09/15/07 Posts: 136	Mon 10/08/07 08:21 AM
Hey Fred whens your surgery?

fredwood28 Joined Fri 04/13/07 Posts: 304	Mon 10/08/07 08:23 AM
its tomorrow mornin around 10am but i have to be there around 8am. so im headin to seattle tonight

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 10/08/07 08:23 AM
wow,we all can get there no matter what our past hods...forgivness is something we can all get...my prayers are with you

KentClark123 Joined Sat 09/15/07 Posts: 136	Mon 10/08/07 08:32 AM
Fred ill be thinking about you tomorrow. let me know how it goes. ok

traviscooper Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 125	Mon 10/08/07 08:33 AM
Hey Fred you didnt play basketball again did you to make you spit up blood again?

fredwood28 Joined Fri 04/13/07 Posts: 304	Mon 10/08/07 08:35 AM
thanx phk and you guys. no travis i havent been playin bball. for some reason all day yesterday i was spitin up blood

bigbayhrsrider Joined Fri 08/18/06 Posts: 450	Mon 10/08/07 08:38 AM
HEY FRED.. good luck .. my thoughts are with you .. had same kind of yr myself. but we WILL prevail you know bigbayhrsrider

fredwood28 Joined Fri 04/13/07 Posts: 304	Mon 10/08/07 08:57 AM
thanx bigbayhrsrider

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 10/08/07 09:27 AM
Prayers for you Fred...

fredwood28 Joined Fri 04/13/07 Posts: 304	Mon 10/08/07 11:17 AM
thanx MsTeddyBear2u

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Mon 10/08/07 12:02 PM
Prayers are with you Fred

blonderockermom Joined Wed 08/08/07 Posts: 6886	Mon 10/08/07 12:04 PM
Fred my prayers are with you as well

fredwood28 Joined Fri 04/13/07 Posts: 304	Mon 10/08/07 08:10 PM
thanx everyone

colony12 Joined Fri 09/28/07 Posts: 17	Mon 10/08/07 10:57 PM
Everytime I read it it hits my heart

KentClark123 Joined Sat 09/15/07 Posts: 136	Tue 10/09/07 07:09 AM
Hey Fred I really like this one

fredwood28 Joined Fri 04/13/07 Posts: 304	Tue 10/09/07 07:09 AM
thanx guys

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