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Topic: just waiting....
TheLonelyWalker Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 11870	Fri 09/21/07 08:46 AM
Here I am another day. Looking at you, I see you around. I give you space i keep myself away. Wishing you the best hoping your return soon. I'm always here constant like the sunrise. With a wide smile always ready for you. Smile back someday no matter when whenever you have time my heart is just expecting.

BayAreaGal Joined Sat 07/28/07 Posts: 6070	Fri 09/21/07 08:47 AM
Nice poem, LTW!

TheLonelyWalker Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 11870	Fri 09/21/07 08:48 AM
thanxs

FreshMountainAir Joined Thu 08/30/07 Posts: 17879	Fri 09/21/07 08:50 AM
Very nice....

celticfairy Joined Tue 09/18/07 Posts: 441	Fri 09/21/07 08:54 AM
Very nice

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76469	Fri 09/21/07 09:06 AM
good one

Puffins1958 Joined Tue 02/27/07 Posts: 13637	Fri 09/21/07 09:07 AM
Miguel... Very nice...I agree with everyone

JellyBelly182 Joined Mon 08/27/07 Posts: 2773	Fri 09/21/07 09:13 AM
awwww...i like this very much.

TheLonelyWalker Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 11870	Fri 09/21/07 09:13 AM
i believe that giving space it's a good thing in a relationship we want to love the other person, we don't want suffocate him/her

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Fri 09/21/07 09:15 AM
That is beautiful Miguel

JellyBelly182 Joined Mon 08/27/07 Posts: 2773	Fri 09/21/07 09:17 AM
i agree TLW...you don't want ppl to get burnt out on ya after only a week...

TheLonelyWalker Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 11870	Fri 09/21/07 09:18 AM
u got that right

Britty Joined Sat 09/08/07 Posts: 3480	Fri 09/21/07 09:45 AM
lovely poem LTW and I agree with your thoughts about giving the other person space. Enjoy reading your posts.

TheLonelyWalker Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 11870	Fri 09/21/07 09:45 AM


ChelleBelle Joined Sun 07/15/07 Posts: 22893	Fri 09/21/07 09:46 AM
beautiful..

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Fri 09/21/07 11:20 AM


Abracadabra Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 17851	Fri 09/21/07 01:38 PM
You read the thoughts off the tip of my mind. Very nice Miguel.

Gypsy41 Joined Tue 05/15/07 Posts: 123359	Sat 09/22/07 10:37 AM


Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Sat 09/22/07 10:39 AM
I agree... this is very nice.

Snugglesbyfire Joined Sun 04/15/07 Posts: 24422	Sat 09/22/07 11:13 AM
very wise

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