Topic: My first and only poem ever!!!!!
iRon's photo
Thu 09/20/07 04:18 PM
Would it matter if I said I was a great guy, fun loving, kind and a great sense of humor?

Would it matter if I have worked hard for a great life and am now ready to share it someone very special?

Would it matter if I said I would like to be friends first?
Would it matter if I meant what I just said?

Would it matter if I said I want no drama, no games and no psycos and you can expect the same?

Would it matter if I said I know that long distance relationships don't work, at least not for me but can we still be friends?

Would it matter if I have never cheated on any one ever?

Would it matter that all my baggage is nicely packed and put away.

Would it matter if I believed that children are never baggage?

Would it matter if I came with references from other women that I am a great guy?

Would it matter? And if not, please tell me what would????????

I don’t think these words matter to you. How could they, they’re just words on a screen.

The truth is, it does not matter because they are just words on a screen and you will never know them true until you look deep into my eyes and see the beauty of my soul, the strength of heart and the kindness of my spirit.............

CATBW56's photo
Thu 09/20/07 04:23 PM
You're right iron, it doesn't matter....

now come a little closer so I can see them eyeslaugh

Great poem tooflowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 09/20/07 04:27 PM
good poem... but just a little tiny flaw...... on what you are trying to come across... it's the pix hun...


you said:

"you look deep into my eyes and see the beauty of my soul"... we won't see it here coz you've got glasses on... change the pix... you're ok..... that's not an insult....just observation....thanks

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 09/20/07 05:46 PM
smokin There are no truer words than this ones can say what ever
they want to it want matter till you actually meet them face
to face and find out those words they speak are true. Other
wise they are just words upon a screen with no meaing behind
them. For when you look deep into someones that is the
beginnig of getting to really know someone. Really liked this
one. For it only really matters if all those things that one
says is from the heart and not mere words upon a screen.!!

pkh's photo
Thu 09/20/07 07:49 PM
I thought it was beautiful and real,and it would matterflowerforyou I think you should keep writting also that was nice.

s1owhand's photo
Thu 09/20/07 09:04 PM
:wink:

Jess642's photo
Thu 09/20/07 09:06 PM
Hmmmm Ron... I disagree competely...



I know what I know,
and feel what I feel,
and if I never touch the other,
it makes no difference,



they have already touched me.

s1owhand's photo
Thu 09/20/07 10:16 PM
bigsmile