Topic: Laura
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Mon 10/14/13 10:11 AM
Ok so I wrote this because well this beautiful woman and I got into a fight. She doesn't think I hear her and truthfully maybe I don't. Anyway, I know she'll never read this but at least I'm to let her know that I'm not perfect and like the wind that's careful and yet carefree I too have fears yet her love allows me to live as if I can do anything.

Laura

The wind seemed to dance
swirling about
as if it were as careful and carefree
as hope was to me

The wind seemed to stop
just for a moment
before renewing its journey
of leading me

Echoes
near and far
are captured in the breezes soul
I hear you
even when you doubt if I’m listening
you are my poetry

The wind seemed to dance
swirling about
as if it knew
you were the breath within me



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Mon 10/14/13 10:22 AM
Pretty...flowerforyou

mig25's photo
Mon 10/14/13 07:21 PM
Thanks Leigh

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Mon 10/14/13 08:05 PM
Nice Mig !

drinker

pkh's photo
Mon 10/14/13 08:25 PM
Lovely

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Tue 10/15/13 01:30 AM
Loved this. Very beautiful write.flowerforyou