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Edited by
littlelambkin
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Thu 09/26/13 11:04 AM
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Shut the curtains
close the door take off your shirt let me see more climb into bed with me feel my soft skin I'll take you to a place that you never have been fluff up my satin pillows run your fingers through my hair kiss me on the lips but please don't stop there roll over baby, lay on your back better be ready, I'm about to attack close your eyes enjoy my soft touch can tell by your body it's getting to be too much roar like a lion who's had his dessert let me satisfy you darling no time to flirt raise your hands up reach for the stars cuz baby, we're going up there up there that far stop, can't stand it need to feel release passion so powerful oh, never let it cease we have hit the high note have sung it, sung it sweet and loud time to float down down from the clouds rest, relax now let's lay in each others arms time to savor the taste the taste of my sweet charms |
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Thanks 2k, appreciate it. I kinda got carried away with this one..but what the heck
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Sexy very nice
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Thanks sugar, I kinda giggle and laugh to myself and wonder what part of me did this come from? I go on to giggle some more and say to myself what was I thinking posting it?
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Edited by
littlelambkin
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Thu 09/26/13 09:32 PM
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Very sweet. Very sexy. Very nice.
tommy boy === |
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You capture the scene from beginning to end and all that lies in between.
"We've hit the high note." seems to say it all. |
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Thanks sugar, I kinda giggle and laugh to myself and wonder what part of me did this come from? I go on to giggle some more and say to myself what was I thinking posting it? |
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That got me going for sure!!
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Edited by
littlelambkin
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Fri 09/27/13 06:59 PM
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Thank you Tommy, sending you a cyber soft kiss of thanks your way: Thanks "G" your the greatest. I really appreciate it when you comment. I get to close too the poem and lose objectivity you help center me. When writing this one I was thinking of a woman with her man (her younger man)and her showing him how it's really done. Hmmmmm, nice, wouldn't you say ladies! lol Thanks pk your a dream and "13" hope it was good for you. lol |
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* As for me, your very deeply welcome, littlelamb. This was pleasant to read, and, may I suggest ye post many, many more? You see, real and honest men can appreciate your words as being from a deeper place inside. And what a nice place to be in, eh? I subscribe and respectfully follow your work here. Infact, if ever ye write a book of soft poetry in the future I'd really, really like to know where to go to purchase a copy. I'd hop on down and pick me up one as of . . . yesterday.
You're blessed, Girl. You're blessed with inner warmth and caring. tommy boy / / Ireland, Mon. Sept 30th, 2013 - morning time here on the island. === |
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I loved it.. Beautiful Thank you for sharing
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