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Topic: ~ slowly
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 09/12/13 04:08 PM
i wantto know the thaw im an angel,encased in ice melt me,melt me,slowly i wantto know the thaw melt me,melt me,slowly

GYs41 Joined Thu 09/05/13 Posts: 149	Fri 09/13/13 02:27 AM
This little gem evokes so much emotion. It is the most sensuous thing I've read in a long time. The very best poetry says the most when it says the least, and you've done that. G.

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Fri 09/13/13 02:36 AM
i wantto know the thaw im an angel,encased in ice melt me,melt me,slowly i wantto know the thaw melt me,melt me,slowly Oooo this is sexy yet something else, hmm, how to describe it? I know, genuine!! Love this one

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Fri 09/13/13 03:37 AM
Nice, Babe. Brief and pleasing. tomo ===

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 09/13/13 04:54 AM
You know what I'm going to say, don't you....Steamy! Luv you!

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 09/18/13 09:07 AM
GYs41...I appreciate what you've found in this. mig...sexy yet something else...I like that... tommy...brief and pleasing...I thankyou... Leigh...made me smile...

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 09/18/13 11:47 AM
Loved it

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 09/18/13 12:05 PM
like it

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 09/18/13 07:37 PM
pkh...generous,thankyou... 2KidsMom....nice to see you here...

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