Topic: Please Read & Rate My Profile | |
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Please read and rate my profile.
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It's a pretty good profile. You seem to have just copied and pasted from your Craigslist ad into your profile, but forgot to take out the part saying "thank you for reading my CL ad." That whole paragraph could be removed and the rest of it would work.
Otherwise, it's a bit long to read. Not sure it's a bad thing. Some of the points seem a bit too personal for people to read like that, since you're looking for a long term relationship, so those people might be expected to learn them from being your friend. I guess that's just your idea of full-disclosure, but after a while it looks like a shopping list, and no fun to read. You might want to post a picture of your full body to give the gentlemen an idea of your physical shape, even though you try to describe your body in the text. It may help. So, discounting for the poorly edited text and small selection of photos, I rate it 8/10. Good luck! |
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