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Topic: Widower's Song
GYs41 Joined Thu 09/05/13 Posts: 149	Fri 09/06/13 10:41 AM
I am old When I was young Fell in love Fell deeper yet Then deeper yet Two things I never would have bet That she would die My giant shell of love Fill empty with regret. I am gone When I was young Loved by one Gave back the same Gave more the same Two things I never would have dreamed He'd remain And ever be in pain And just remain.

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GYs41 Joined Thu 09/05/13 Posts: 149	Fri 09/06/13 11:55 AM
Thank you. G.

Annyjo Joined Sun 09/08/13 Posts: 55	Sun 09/08/13 09:49 AM
Hiya. you know I can really feel your pain in your writing . x

GYs41 Joined Thu 09/05/13 Posts: 149	Sun 09/08/13 10:10 AM
Annyjo, Thank you, but that pain was eliminated greatly by the act of putting the emotions into words and expressing them. The loss of a dearly loved one is a tough thing that so many people face. It took me many years and three tours of duty in Iraq to finally shed the burden of pain, but I did it and now seek nothing but happiness for however many years I have left. Thank goodness there are wonderful people in the world and wonderful guitars to fill my days. Thanks again, G.

smartnana Joined Sun 09/01/13 Posts: 19	Mon 09/09/13 05:16 PM
Pretty new here; just popped by to see what's going on. Good poem, and I'm glad it helped soothe the hurt. Maybe I'll post some of mine.

Godiva Joined Tue 12/09/08 Posts: 5330	Mon 09/09/13 06:55 PM
Very powerful writing there. Thank you for sharing it.

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