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Topic: GOOD BYE
Tifalockheart Joined Tue 07/09/13 Posts: 371	Fri 08/02/13 10:16 PM
Longing for you each night is not fair, when i gave you my heart you promised not to break it. We spoke,we laughed,we even had words of anger.... i'm tired of been angry. i'm tired of been sad. I'm tired of been alone. I'm tired of missing you I have dreamed of the day i will never be tired of been tired. It's hasn't been easy this distances between us it makes me crazy, thoughts are flowing in my mind that i can't seem to control. I will always be fine i am strong an true.. GOOD BYE SWEET ONE

Willywonka14159 Joined Sat 08/03/13 Posts: 24	Mon 08/05/13 11:50 PM
Sitting on crunchy autumn leaves and in each others eyes. The world was sweet and kind, and a day lasted forever. Nothing will never replace you, my childhood love. Sneaking out for the thrill of mischief, we were all we needed, and the future was complete. The way we laughed in the blissful heat of summer, and the way your eyes shimmered in the moonlight. Every night I go down to the park, but you will never be there again.....goodbye.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Tue 08/06/13 04:01 AM


TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76426	Tue 08/06/13 08:34 AM
Good write and heartfelt~~~

Tifalockheart Joined Tue 07/09/13 Posts: 371	Sat 08/10/13 06:16 PM
Every now an then i see apart of you that know one has ever seen before, Every now an then i try to tell you just how i how i feel. Now that we are fallen i see how much you mean to me. but the distances that comes between us will always be there.i know now that everyone has secrets, trust issues, because of the way i look i get judged trust is alway with me i just wish that you could see that, but who am i to say trust me i'm just a simple lady looking for LOVE. I HAVE FALLEN.

Tifalockheart Joined Tue 07/09/13 Posts: 371	Sat 08/10/13 06:16 PM
Good write and heartfelt~~~ THANK YOU

farandbetween Joined Fri 12/14/12 Posts: 11	Sat 08/10/13 06:35 PM
Shear and destructive thoughts that rage with a heart pumped; black blood that flows the toxins in my veins. Departed from this typical reality, and this steamed, fogged earth, breathing out our spirit; screaming out as the claws clamp down on innocent flesh. Irritating echoes through my ear drums, melting my wax, so in a frantic way, I can hear again? Time stands still as a dream, dreams my dream. Cold and clammy, but not dead yet....As I walk wretched and dismayed by all the empty drones that walk the earth these days. Laughter bellows up from chest, throat and now through my lips.... Thank God I'm not like them!

Tifalockheart Joined Tue 07/09/13 Posts: 371	Sat 08/10/13 06:48 PM
Sitting on crunchy autumn leaves and in each others eyes. The world was sweet and kind, and a day lasted forever. Nothing will never replace you, my childhood love. Sneaking out for the thrill of mischief, we were all we needed, and the future was complete. The way we laughed in the blissful heat of summer, and the way your eyes shimmered in the moonlight. Every night I go down to the park, but you will never be there again.....goodbye.

Tifalockheart Joined Tue 07/09/13 Posts: 371	Sat 08/10/13 06:50 PM
Shear and destructive thoughts that rage with a heart pumped; black blood that flows the toxins in my veins. Departed from this typical reality, and this steamed, fogged earth, breathing out our spirit; screaming out as the claws clamp down on innocent flesh. Irritating echoes through my ear drums, melting my wax, so in a frantic way, I can hear again? Time stands still as a dream, dreams my dream. Cold and clammy, but not dead yet....As I walk wretched and dismayed by all the empty drones that walk the earth these days. Laughter bellows up from chest, throat and now through my lips.... Thank God I'm not like them! i like the way you write it's beautiful an it makes me smile thank you....

farandbetween Joined Fri 12/14/12 Posts: 11	Sat 08/10/13 07:06 PM
Thank You....Miss Tifalockheart! Sorry for your loss; and I know how you feel, been there too. Love is hard to find these days, and I'm glad I made you smile!

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sat 08/10/13 07:10 PM
Deep from the heart...

Tifalockheart Joined Tue 07/09/13 Posts: 371	Sat 08/10/13 07:58 PM
Thank You....Miss Tifalockheart! Sorry for your loss; and I know how you feel, been there too. Love is hard to find these days, and I'm glad I made you smile! Thank you farandbetween an Sharris i must say i see why alot of people just give up in finding love i no i've DEACTIVATED this account so many times it's not funny.. but here i am again i must be MAD...lol

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Sat 08/10/13 08:14 PM
Longing for you each night is not fair, when i gave you my heart you promised not to break it. We spoke,we laughed,we even had words of anger.... i'm tired of been angry. i'm tired of been sad. I'm tired of been alone. I'm tired of missing you I have dreamed of the day i will never be tired of been tired. It's hasn't been easy this distances between us it makes me crazy, thoughts are flowing in my mind that i can't seem to control. I will always be fine i am strong an true.. GOOD BYE SWEET ONE Heartfelt! (((( tifa)))

Tifalockheart Joined Tue 07/09/13 Posts: 371	Sat 08/10/13 08:37 PM Edited by Tifalockheart on Sat 08/10/13 09:32 PM
Big hugs to you 2kidsmom thank you lovely lady...

Tifalockheart Joined Tue 07/09/13 Posts: 371	Sat 08/10/13 09:33 PM


2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Sat 08/10/13 09:35 PM
Big hugs to you 2kidsmom thank you lovely lady...

sanjeev009 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 2115	Sat 08/10/13 11:09 PM
wow beautiful well done

Tifalockheart Joined Tue 07/09/13 Posts: 371	Sat 08/10/13 11:26 PM
Ummm thanks Sanjee....

Tifalockheart Joined Tue 07/09/13 Posts: 371	Wed 09/11/13 10:22 PM
Ummm thanks Sanjee....