It would be nice if someone would be so kind as to finish this.

Steam



Steam rose
clouding the mirrors
as the water pounded my soul
relaxing every part of me

Candles flickered
as if they were dancing to the music
playing in the background

I was startled by the sudden stream of cool air
and the accompanying noise of the door opening
along with her voice
soft
sweet
and sensual
she asked, “Mind if I join you?”
“Of course not”

I always enjoy your work, Mig,..whatever the subject is, you always manage to turn it into something ever so delightful to read...
I wish i can write poems too, you inspire me!

Sly smile and silken robe
pooled as a cloud covering her feet
gooseflesh from sudden change
in temperature

or was it
something more?
a long tanned leg
forces the curtain out of the way

as water droplets
moist
dripping
on the antique tile

Finger pressed to lip
shhhhh
as fingers dance
on soapy skin

and breath
at once hot and cold
running the course
from neck to shoulder

as hands
encircle
touching
caressing
wanting
needing

was that a ...
........
oh yes
shudder ...



or something like that off the cuff

That was great, both of you. Loved it