This is my first one I appreciate all feed back I have some others I can put up if you all don't think this is to terrible.

I was told that sex is just your emotions in motion.
Another expression of our love
Just a token
And at first that’s what I believed,
But with you it became hard to breath,
And out of that I conceived a new notion
The Idea that physical could become spiritual
It’s as if my soul was moved,
I knew that you could feel it to.
And so I couldn't live with it lasting only those hours.
That’s why I’m on my knee, with a ring and these flowers
Making everything that is mine,
Into ours.

Beautiful

Congratulations TJ...

Perfect

Hey awesome poem, I like how simple and straight forward it is. Last four lines fell together perfectly :D

Hey ty everybody for the feed back :)