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| Topic: THE FIRST POEM OF MY SECOND BOOK. | |
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I havent written a poem in at least a year, and tonight this came out. So I will let it be the first poem of my next book, "Thoughts from Within (part 2)". I wanna share it, and this moment, with the people that are always there for me...you. If your reading this, I love you, and thank you for always being there for me. ~Kitten~
Quick Sand "I dont know where im going, but I sure know where ive been". That lyric, is so damn cliche' Ill cringe, if I hear it again. In spite of that, I wonder I just cant wait to see what will become, of this life that im living what will become, of me? I feel like im in quick sand and even though I try I just cant, seem to, move forward I sit, and I wonder, why? "Life is what you make it". So I guess,its time to start to gather the broken pieces of me ive watched, just fall apart. I need some motivation surviving cancer,should be enough but its still an uphill battle that never, stops being tough. I know the way im living has surely, got to end and I need to do things differently for my life, to begin, again. Im always looking for "HIM" my lover, and my friend its gotta stop, so I can get on top of the things, that REALLY matter, again. Ive told people what they do wrong not just once, or twice but im starting to feel, like a hypocrite I should follow my own advice. So "Giddy up, and go girl", ill tell myself, again and maybe...just mayyyyyyyybe, this time my life will finally begin. Roberta Murdock 5/22/2013 
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((((((((Luv)))))))))
    I haven't even read it yet...but I will!
Just wanted to send hugs first..I've missed you;) Sherrie 2K |
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It is AWESOME !
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Ahhhhh..loved it!!!!!
Hugs... 
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Great write
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I havent written a poem in at least a year, and tonight this came out. So I will let it be the first poem of my next book, "Thoughts from Within (part 2)". I wanna share it, and this moment, with the people that are always there for me...you. If your reading this, I love you, and thank you for always being there for me. ~Kitten~
Quick Sand "I dont know where im going, but I sure know where ive been". That lyric, is so damn cliche' Ill cringe, if I hear it again. In spite of that, I wonder I just cant wait to see what will become, of this life that im living what will become, of me? I feel like im in quick sand and even though I try I just cant, seem to, move forward I sit, and I wonder, why? "Life is what you make it". So I guess,its time to start to gather the broken pieces of me ive watched, just fall apart. I need some motivation surviving cancer,should be enough but its still an uphill battle that never, stops being tough. I know the way im living has surely, got to end and I need to do things differently for my life, to begin, again. Im always looking for "HIM" my lover, and my friend its gotta stop, so I can get on top of the things, that REALLY matter, again. Ive told people what they do wrong not just once, or twice but im starting to feel, like a hypocrite I should follow my own advice. So "Giddy up, and go girl", ill tell myself, again and maybe...just mayyyyyyyybe, this time my life will finally begin. Roberta Murdock 5/22/2013
Awesome!
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Beautiful poem
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{color=blue]Roberta it is a awesome write.
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Some of the best poems are written when life throws curve balls at you. The best poems come from the heart. This came from your heart. You "Giddy Up & Go Girl".... You'll get there. When you do, you can genuinely smile for the rest of your life
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Wow.
Thanks you guys!
Im so glad you liked it so much!
I thought I was out of sync a bit, but maybe not. 
I love and miss you all too!
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I like it a lot
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Soul searching is tough.
But don't let that stop ya. Keep it up girl. |
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Thanks Cutiepie!
You know me, homie!
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<---*Is tapping her toe and looking at her watch and waiting for more compliments*
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am I late?
Nice write, we expect nothing less from you! |
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Edited by
KiK2me
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Sun 05/26/13 04:37 PM
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<---*Is tapping her toe and looking at her watch and waiting for more compliments*
Your tongue must taste like candy ? hehehe
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am I late?
Nice write, we expect nothing less from you! 
I cant believe...MORE COMPLIMENTS!! 
Who would of thunk it! 
Im just shocked, and thank you! 
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that was amazing dear....well am a singer/songwriter/poet its not my business to be here in this site just need some free time kept all my writings on poetry.com
"Am made in darkness I grew in darkness I live in darkness all I can see dis darkness is my mother darkness is my father, Am I blind? Merely now I can see a new face in dat darkness, clouds, stars and planets, oh! No am I dead? Yeah it seems to be, my girl loves to stare at stars, look at de stars when she get angry. She likes em' no, no, she loves em' I haven’t seen her for a week, thought dat she would be surfing here all around de stars, I made mi death easier and faster searching all de corners of galaxy way through the stars but I can’t find no corner n' no girl....Cried and cried Coming to a conclusion my girl was a real star and my Love had no corners like a galaxy"-SusiprasaD |
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That's beautiful! Love your strength Hugz!
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