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Here we are broken hearted,
looking back on how this started. We loved, we laughed, we shared a life, living dreams as man and wife. The skies turned blue from dark to light, holding true, love at first sight! As time went on things start to fade, that once bright light turned into shade. The dark set in on us again, we know now why, how things have been. We hate to have to let this go, the time has come, and we both know. The sun will rise with new hope for, the one we seek, or even more. To make that light shine once again, for this is now, and never then... |
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Awesome write~~
When we are faced with a relationship that is no more we seek for the answers of what happen to that spark that once was. Within time we may not find that spark with that one again but with another and we learn from the road we have traveled... |
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Great write
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beautiful
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Here we are broken hearted, looking back on how this started. We loved, we laughed, we shared a life, living dreams as man and wife. The skies turned blue from dark to light, holding true, love at first sight! As time went on things start to fade, that once bright light turned into shade. The dark set in on us again, we know now why, how things have been. We hate to have to let this go, the time has come, and we both know. The sun will rise with new hope for, the one we seek, or even more. To make that light shine once again, for this is now, and never then... Beautiful, lyrical, bittersweet ....Thank you for sharing Journeyman! |
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Thanks yall, that's my life right now & the ol' heart decided to start blabbing today I haven't written anything in years so I thought I would give it a shot. I used to write lyrics for a heavy metal band I was in a long time ago, none of which I could ever post here...
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Edited by
Leigh2154
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Sat 05/18/13 02:58 PM
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Thanks yall, that's my life right now & the ol' heart decided to start blabbing today I haven't written anything in years so I thought I would give it a shot. I used to write lyrics for a heavy metal band I was in a long time ago, none of which I could ever post here... Think email |
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'words of heart'
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'words of heart' Exactly |
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welcome...
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welcome... Thanks kc! |
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You are so so right......That situation has happened to me too...... i know what it's like...We both need to find a SPARK ..that will never burn out ........maybe one day soon..
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i know what you feel like...as this has happened to me....we both need to search for a spark thst will not burn out......lol.....very well written .....
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i know what you feel like...as this has happened to me....we both need to search for a spark thst will not burn out......lol.....very well written ..... Thanks & I think it has mebbe??? They call me the Seeker, I've been searching low & high! I won't get to get what I'm after, Till the day I die! |
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Nice, thanks for sharing
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Cry'n shame when the love has flown! Never give up though : ) Our wings are for flying tempests and calm xx
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Heartfelt..enjoyed
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I just read that again its an awesome write. You should continue again
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