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Topic: Recaptured Serenity
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Wed 02/13/13 05:08 PM
As the tears start to fade
And Alice turns from jade
She finds herself again
With those her friends.
Walking away was hard.
Cause heart was scarred.
But this time it will heal.
And maybe she will feel.
It was quite a great loss.
Wonderland has moss.
And she isn't a stone.
Firmly but not alone.
A couple means two.
What is gone is you.
It wasn't meant to be.
Recaptured serenity.
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Wed 02/13/13 08:44 PM
Nice write....smokin
pennyg281's photo
Thu 02/14/13 12:19 AM
Awesome as always. flowerforyou
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Thu 02/14/13 03:48 AM
Enjoyed this T...Happy V day...flowerforyou
mowildflower's photo
Thu 02/14/13 03:53 AM
Wow... I enjoyed

flowerforyou Flowers for you on this Valentine's Day
RainbowTrout's photo
Thu 02/14/13 05:59 AM
Happy Valentine's Day. flowerforyou Thank you. :smile:
woznotwoz's photo
Thu 02/14/13 06:13 AM
captured me flowerforyou
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Thu 02/14/13 12:11 PM
I've read it three times, trout, trying to come to a different conclusion, but all I see is the sadness at the end... "What is gone is you", and it hurts.. :cry: Happy Valentines, my friend... :heart: flowerforyou
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Fri 02/15/13 06:01 AM
Hey Roy enjoyed reading.
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Fri 02/15/13 07:27 AM
Very astute, Athena. In our meetings we say that acceptance is the key to all our problems. The contradictions are really hard to accept. Just have to work our way through them. It is like okay what am I missing. I am sure you have been acquainted with everything seemed to working perfectly.:smile:
RainbowTrout's photo
Fri 02/15/13 07:32 AM
I am glad to be getting through some of the writer's block I have been having, Jeff. Nothing works quite as well as honesty.:smile:
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Fri 02/15/13 07:33 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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Sun 02/17/13 06:03 AM
awesome :)

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