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wind moans soft in waiting
crowd restlessly anticipates tread of boots from the hall jingling keys awake cold steel turns in the lock preacherman awaits a few words to ease one last walk i take in the courtyard fate awaits six steps to raise me high no last words to say darkness as the hood is placed now only the noose remains lever's pulled and night descends creaking of the hangman's rope gently as I sway |
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Bravo,,, (((( Hanged ))))))
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Thanks LA
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oh Hang that came to life before my eyes, I could see a person taking those last steps.
good job on showing us the thoughts that could go through a persons mind at a time like that
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thankee Snuggs
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Awwwwww very good HangedMan hummm see ya been hiding your talent
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ooo - Well done, Hanged!!
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thank you TxsGal, Different.
not so much hiding. they just don't come easily. i'm way too picky. |
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great visuals described in a short abrupt way like the end of his life is going to be. EXCELLENT
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Once again, your writing takes shape and makes the images real to us all...very well written.
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Very well written,felt I was right there watching.
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a true expression of economy...
with few words my mind filled in all the details and emotion by all you didn't say. well done!!!
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Very nice Hanged
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Nice job Hanged!! very vivid
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 well thank you all. I really appreciate the comments.
((((hugs to all )))) |
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((Hanged))
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awww another good one
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beautifully written hanged........
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wow hangedman, makes u feel as if u were there!!
very nice
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