Topic: 1-10
Pyje's photo
Sun 01/27/13 12:27 PM
What do yall rate me?

jorusi63's photo
Tue 01/29/13 04:05 AM
You have a good start. Maybe add what your looking for in a woman, what type of woman you want to date. Good luck!

TexasScoundrel's photo
Tue 01/29/13 10:21 AM
A one line profile? Really? What are you saying? I'm too lazy to actually bother with this?

Start with some kind of hook. Something to grab the reader and pull her in. Then add some information about you. What do you enjoy? How do you find fulfillment? What are your goals in life? How will you achieve them? Paint a picture of your life that women will want to be in with you.

After that, talk about the type of women you'd like to meet. Do you prefer stay at home women that cook and clean or highly motivated carrier women with aspirations?

Watch your grammar and spell check everything.

Tritorium_Theory's photo
Tue 01/29/13 05:05 PM
I agree with Texas there, that profile could do with a lot more information in it. Other than checking spelling and grammar, you should be good to go. :)