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i keep layering sins
i hang roses upsidedown tied with ribbon lovework against the antique mirror is it the roses or the hanging that pleases me lovework i keep layering sins tying knots upon knots lovework waiting for you to undo me love comes as a kiss take it submit lovecure |
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Sweet!
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i keep layering sins i hang roses upsidedown tied with ribbon lovework against the antique mirror is it the roses or the hanging that pleases me lovework i keep layering sins tying knots upon knots lovework waiting for you to undo me love comes as a kiss take it submit lovecure awwwww love |
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Leigh2154....kind!
tazzops... ![]() Zimzane2....awwwww... |
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You hooked me by the first line. This is amazing.
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plastic_pancakes....& im pleased by what you left me.
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loveit...
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kc0003....
![]() Ainjel...awesome! |
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Nice write TB
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i keep layering sins i hang roses upsidedown tied with ribbon lovework against the antique mirror is it the roses or the hanging that pleases me lovework i keep layering sins tying knots upon knots lovework waiting for you to undo me love comes as a kiss take it submit lovecure Now this is poetry . . . I truly love this one!!! |
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penny281....thankyou...
mig25.... ![]() |
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I love the way you expressed the complexity of how love works with such tender simplicity, teasing.. waiting to be undone... really cool...
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Edited by
Teditis
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Wed 01/23/13 06:25 PM
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'tis awesome indeed... one of yer best.(imho)
But take it from a pro... someone who over thinks everything, try this mindset instead (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PV3864aqAr0) Not me, of course... I meant "him"; it's not in the "hanging"... it's in the hanging around (wondering). |
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AthenaRose2...and i thankyou for reading...
Teditis...color me surprised... |
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AthenaRose2...and i thankyou for reading... Teditis...color me surprised... Haha, No. I'll color you B&W with pink highlights... just as you present. ![]() |
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