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Sitting alone in the corner
buried in deep thoughts in my ears it echos the millions screaming aloud the time has come again for me to step into the ring something so unstoppable indestructible fearsome force always a guranteed win but still i ponder everytime a man falls to my feet the crowds cheer my name echoing through the air but inside a voice telling me softly what have i done what have i become... |
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like all the others
or are you different and if you would be different who will you be? journey not to discover - this is tourism make yourself exceptional build something great that is the journey this is the quest |
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i like it
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very nice
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HBK, YOU HAVE NOT DONE ANYTHING YET, YOU HAVE LOT TO DO NOW AND AHEAD
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the powers that drive us HBK always hold questions to which we have no answers.....
Lovely writing sweet one...I love it~ 
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nice writing...its not the answers you seek...its the acceptance
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ok lemme give this poem stuff a whirl.
hep hem! "there once was a man from Nantucket" 
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Hummm sounds as if one has become what everyone else
wanted them to become. Yet another very good one I'm impressed, you should write more 
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:) thanks everyone
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great imagery and great writing
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HBK....wonderful
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Good one bro
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