Topic: m.
jimz's photo
Sun 08/05/07 02:33 PM
walk down the spotted aisles
where you looked into a man's eyes
and all you could see
was the red
and ambiguous stare
of blind lust

so you took the green bills
but quickly
you had to spend them
to forget you took them

and me
falling in love
with your torn twist
of my heart

in the deep yet shallow
spaces
of the streets
your dress and shoes
and face
all made up like a pretty
vagabond

and the cars that stop
don't want you
but want themselves
to find that grace
is not truth
when they empty the desire
of wasted love
and the man says
no violation
no sin

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 08/05/07 03:19 PM
flowerforyou another very good one

HapppyGirl's photo
Sun 08/05/07 03:34 PM
yes...very passionately said.....

A sad truth to many souls....and you know they are not any different than we are....sitting here pegging at the board...writing words......saying what ever..posting what ever pics we see fit....Their life is more real than ours at times...im sure....well my two cents into this controversy...

jimz's photo
Sun 08/05/07 04:55 PM
True HappyGirl, sometimes the wisdom of the soul only comes when you taste the fire of the abyss, I was homeless for fifteen years, insane in my twenties, and in my life, I've met some the best souls, who society turns a deaf ear to. And my baby, she was and is still wiser than I will ever be, my angel, my lost angel.

pkh's photo
Sun 08/05/07 05:18 PM
Very nice again.We all think are problems are so bad.Till we hear someone eles story.I'm so glad your hear,and enjoy reading your words.Pamflowerforyou

jimz's photo
Sun 08/05/07 05:28 PM
Sh*t, here comes the tears, I've cried so for much her, is the pain ever going to stop.

pkh's photo
Sun 08/05/07 05:33 PM
I'm so sorry.But it will in time,and you will move on and be happy.Keep writting to let go of some of the feelings.flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Sun 08/05/07 05:37 PM
:cry: flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sun 08/05/07 10:21 PM
:cry: flowerforyou

Time will heal your heart,,,