Topic: Profile re-write
TexasScoundrel's photo
Fri 06/29/12 10:49 AM
Is it too long or short? Is there something interesting you'd like to read more about? Is any part dull? Did something in it make you smile? Do you feel it gives a sense of who I am? Please let me know of any misspellings.

Thanks.

soufiehere's photo
Fri 06/29/12 11:00 AM
Mixed signals..main pic is with a woman while
your headline says you seek one.

I am going to guess, as I don't know you, that
it reflects you all the way, from what I have
seen you express on the forums.

I did smile, with a bit of a head shake
at the same time :-)

As I forgot to check for misspellings, I
shall go back and look, if I don't come back,
it's good.

Edit: Saw just one, Nightclubing=Nightclubbing.
(But I am one of those speed-read freaks that
can see a word with just a couple letters
correct so I would not rely on me.)

FindMe1113's photo
Fri 06/29/12 01:25 PM
I like it Scoundrel:smile:
(I thought you were already taken)

TexasScoundrel's photo
Fri 06/29/12 08:52 PM

I like it Scoundrel:smile:
(I thought you were already taken)


That may be changing. She's on probation right now.

Totage's photo
Fri 06/29/12 08:57 PM
It's too long. I'd shorten it a bit.

TexasScoundrel's photo
Fri 06/29/12 09:02 PM

It's too long. I'd shorten it a bit.


Interesting. I was thinking it wasn't long enough. It's only about 550 words and long sales letters are proven to work better than short ones.

But, thanks for your thought.

Totage's photo
Fri 06/29/12 09:13 PM
Short ads tend to be more effective than longer ones.

no photo
Sat 06/30/12 01:55 AM
Edited by 42BlackBBW on Sat 06/30/12 02:02 AM
I may have misinterpreted your first para but IMO, it’s an inaccurate assumption made against those (who read)your profile wouldn't attract anyway - waste of words.

Your pics a little confusing to.

Obviously shows honesty, wit, intelligence, a certain charm about you and self appreciation is not always perceived as a negative.

Constructively, I liked the first half better than the second - it's too long and IMO, the second bit after "I love sex" doesn't do you any favours. Liked the last para though.

I lost points – I had to look it up laugh

no photo
Sat 06/30/12 01:58 AM
Edited by 42BlackBBW on Sat 06/30/12 01:59 AM
offtopic

Totage: Wow..what a lovely surprise...the outside matches the inside. Think I'm gonna swoon now laugh

TexasScoundrel's photo
Sat 06/30/12 02:44 AM
Thanks to everyone for their thoughts. I'm truly grateful.

Totage's photo
Sat 06/30/12 11:25 AM

offtopic

Totage: Wow..what a lovely surprise...the outside matches the inside. Think I'm gonna swoon now laugh


TY :)

I had to take the suit to the cleaners, and I thought I'd get a nice clean shave as well. :P

;)

cherish253's photo
Sat 06/30/12 09:32 PM
I think the profile is to long. I would rather just read a little about you on the profile and if interested I would message and we would still have something to talk bout lol. If you put up something to long me speaking for myself wouldn't wanna sit there and read it all. :)

Jtevans's photo
Sat 06/30/12 09:46 PM

It's too long. I'd shorten it a bit.



that's what she said smokin

PacificStar48's photo
Tue 07/03/12 10:07 AM
Edited by PacificStar48 on Tue 07/03/12 10:12 AM
Bit long. Seems to capture your personality then sounds like you are trying to convince yourself it is ok. Talking about Ex's would make me back up if I were thinking about contacting you. You often make me smile, or think which is not a bad thing, but sometimes I am not sure I am not just thinking Oh Gheese he really said that?

Oh the lead pic is not the greatest with your hand up; it is distracting.