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Topic: "Emotional Avoidance"
Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Wed 03/07/12 06:29 AM Edited by Sin_and_Sorrow on Wed 03/07/12 06:40 AM
I wrote this while listening to Epica's song: "Quietus" Enjoy. Maybe? xD "Emotional Avoidance" Darkest cloud. Come hither. I seek your comfort. My inner solstice. Let me drown in your rain. They are nothing but. Tears ignored by the divine. A certain something. Said to be greater than ourselves. Fear not the darkness. For it is in the light. True cruelty dwells. A stranger becomes family. Family becomes the enemy. Like the raven on the fence. Awaiting the moment. When your back is turned. Be like the natural predator. Built upon instinct. Handcrafted desire. Constructed by nature. Aim for the weakest. But seek not the sickest. Words are but the venom. Spewed by poisonous tongues. The path of enlightenment. Can only be built. On a path made of bad choices. All such only finds you. Under the shelter of regret. Take the road buried in shade. If you wish not to feel sorrow. Then heed my words. Find yourself not. In the sense of false glory. Ignorantly basking in the sunlight. Shed by that which makes you whole. An idea mortals call love.

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Wed 03/07/12 04:28 PM
:O

RainbowTrout Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 13869	Wed 03/07/12 04:55 PM
Good write.

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Wed 03/07/12 06:55 PM
Good write. :) ty

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Wed 03/07/12 08:03 PM
Fabulous..

Naturalcurly Joined Sat 02/11/12 Posts: 590	Wed 03/07/12 11:20 PM
I like it, just couldn't understand. "hither" is that another meaning to "here"?

txmomof2 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 73300	Thu 03/08/12 12:27 AM
Awesome write as always :D

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Thu 03/08/12 05:09 AM
I like it, just couldn't understand. "hither" is that another meaning to "here"? Yes Hither, by definition: "To go towards a certain place". Hither and Thither. Shakespearean. Ainjel and Txmom. Thank you. :) <3

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Fri 03/09/12 04:51 AM
The path of enlightenment. Can only be built. On a path made of bad choices. This part sounds like my life. :) lived the write.

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Fri 03/09/12 01:22 PM
The path of enlightenment. Can only be built. On a path made of bad choices. This part sounds like my life. :) lived the write. :) Glad you can relate to it. :P

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sat 03/10/12 10:09 AM
had to listen to the inspiration, then read. i enjoyed the journey :)

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Sat 03/10/12 10:19 AM
had to listen to the inspiration, then read. i enjoyed the journey :) :D ..you listened to them? Ever hear her sing before? I get made fun of cause I love Epica, but idfc. -.- I love her lyrics and like her voices, so meh. Glad you liked it. :)

1956CLEO Joined Wed 10/03/07 Posts: 4518	Sat 03/10/12 11:02 AM
Beautiful!

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sat 03/10/12 11:16 AM
had to listen to the inspiration, then read. i enjoyed the journey :) :D ..you listened to them? Ever hear her sing before? I get made fun of cause I love Epica, but idfc. -.- I love her lyrics and like her voices, so meh. Glad you liked it. :) i did listen, amazing voice!! kinda of like cradle of filth meets evanescence meets drop kick murphys meets madam butterfly - just a huge music feast!! thanks for posting the write and the song mention :)

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Sat 03/10/12 11:32 AM
Beautiful! Thank you. :)

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Sat 03/10/12 11:33 AM
had to listen to the inspiration, then read. i enjoyed the journey :) :D ..you listened to them? Ever hear her sing before? I get made fun of cause I love Epica, but idfc. -.- I love her lyrics and like her voices, so meh. Glad you liked it. :) i did listen, amazing voice!! kinda of like cradle of filth meets evanescence meets drop kick murphys meets madam butterfly - just a huge music feast!! thanks for posting the write and the song mention :) No problem. :) Glad you enjoyed. I take it you never heard of Epica before?

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sat 03/10/12 04:28 PM
I take it you never heard of Epica before? nope, and always enjoy checking out new, to me :)

PacificStar48 Joined Tue 10/02/07 Posts: 13764	Sat 03/10/12 06:14 PM
Wow great write

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Sat 03/10/12 06:23 PM
I take it you never heard of Epica before? nope, and always enjoy checking out new, to me :) Cool. :) Glad you like both. :D

Sin_and_Sorrow Joined Sun 01/01/12 Posts: 5757	Sat 03/10/12 06:24 PM
Wow great write Thank you. :)