Topic: What?
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Sun 11/13/11 12:19 AM
So many have fear,,when its only rain.
Much of this World, can't feel pain.
Complain about what can't be changed.
Trust in things that can't be explained.
Live for the moment, no-matter its torment.
Express who you want to be.
Make a statement, "look at me".
Be an example, a Society sample.
Make your mark, glow in the dark.
Think up some words, and find some Ink.
Forget the principle, just slide the dicimal.
Are you hearing what can't be said.
Or are you talking about being dead.
Lets be bold, break the mold.
Start out strong even if its wrong.
Just another day and another song.:heart:




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Sun 11/13/11 03:13 AM
Nicely put :-)

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Sun 11/13/11 08:03 PM

Nicely put :-)
flowerforyou Thanks for the words soufie,,,I get one review a write anymore,,,,laugh but ITS special,,,,drinker

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Fri 11/18/11 05:40 PM
Inspiring,
well put iam4u...
going to print this out and tape it to my refrigerator door
Thanks

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Fri 11/18/11 09:13 PM

Inspiring,
well put iam4u...
going to print this out and tape it to my refrigerator door
Thanks
drinker Why THANK YOU Todd,,and welcome to the funny farm of odd folks,,,,well,,ME anyway,,laugh

Have a great Thanksgiving and keep on a reading..drinker

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Sat 11/19/11 08:54 PM
Quite a sword you wield and with dexterity.

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Sat 11/19/11 09:44 PM

Quite a sword you wield and with dexterity.

Sharp and cutting is the tongue of truth,
For its victims fall quickly, gasping in their denial.
Bleeding out all their guilty remorse, sub-line lies.
Forsaking that in which was, undertaking their own, as IS.
Such is that which they feel a need to do, yet SO untrue.
For a new generation has came of age, full of built-up rage.


Thanks Sadie,,,flowerforyou drinker I am just a dreamer of words

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Sun 11/20/11 02:26 PM
I've read quite a few of your poems, and you have quite the way with words. As my late gran would say, "you summon them and they do your bidding."

Always a pleasure to read.

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Sun 11/20/11 02:42 PM
I Enjoy everythong you write

flowerforyou

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Sun 11/20/11 02:46 PM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sun 11/20/11 02:46 PM
Edited by tazzops on Sun 11/20/11 02:46 PM

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Mon 11/21/11 10:49 AM

I've read quite a few of your poems, and you have quite the way with words. As my late gran would say, "you summon them and they do your bidding."

Always a pleasure to read.
flowerforyou Thank you Miss AfriQueen,,Your very kind..
I promise to keep-on writing if you keep-on reading,,lol:wink:

flowers Have a great Thanksgiviving!!!!:banana:

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Mon 11/21/11 10:52 AM

I Enjoy everythong you write

flowerforyou
Awwww,,that makes every write I've ever done,,worth the time it took to think them,,,lol,,,

Have a really nice Thanksgiving and my Prayers will keep coming your way,,Be Blessed and may God keep you always close. safe, and well..flowerforyou :heart:

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Mon 11/21/11 10:54 AM
drinker Thanks Tazz Man,,,for reading this,,
Have a super Thanksgiving,,,,:banana:

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Mon 11/21/11 11:22 AM

drinker Thanks Tazz Man,,,for reading this,,
Have a super Thanksgiving,,,,:banana:
Thank you for your writings.