If I showed you mine, would you show me yours?
You would be my first.
Would I be your last?
Would this be our destination, or just another pitstop on life's journey?

If I showed you mine, would you stay through the night?
Respect me in the light?
Would you kiss me over that scar?
Would your hands soothe the pain?
Or would you turn away from my imperfections, disgusted by the secrets I keep so well hidden?

If I showed you mine, would you still call me beautiful?
Would we carry on today as if it were still yesterday?
Would everything change?
Would nothing stay the same?

If I stripped myself of my vulnerabilities,
bared before you my insecurities,
gave to you what I've given no other,
took you where no man has been...

If I showed you my heart, would you show me yours?

Loved it

Nice write...

Thank you

I love the vulnerability in it. It's so human.

I don't think that one can give their heart without there being a big degree of vulnerability involved.

Lovely :-)

.its very nice....inner feelingsssssssss but yes..........fear. fear of loosing smone ..........thts in it ......written so beautifully.

Thank you.

If I showed you mine, would you show me yours?
What can be seen, when your love blindes me.
Nothing can be felt, but the touch of your hand upon my skin.
There can be no imperfections worth a view.
For its your true love, that's my only view.
You see, before you showed me yours,
I already felt its pain within you.
I already held you close inside my heart.
I already knew your soul joined with my own.
I already felt your embrace, and your touch.
You see, as we have talked,
I've already showed you, so very much.
If I showed you mine, would you show me yours.
Together we can not see flaws in you or me.
Its through our love which holds all that endures...

A beautiful write Miss Queen....
just thought I'd answer it for ya,,,

Wow... This is beautiful

Would you kiss me over that scar?

So vulnerable, Teadipper is right...Thanks for sharing, I loved it..

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Thank you