Topic: heart on the line
thedoctor's photo
Tue 07/17/07 08:22 AM
heart on the line, just wanting to know
how you've been feeling, how'd your day go
did the morning come as a sweet sunrise
did it gently caress you, 'til you opened your eyes

was your afternoon good, and all it could be
was sucess your partner, from noon until three
as the breeze softly blows, into evening you go
I hope things went well.. as always, you know

dreaming the night, let you relax and enjoy
pleasures and moments, you sought to employ
and when you laid your head down, to fall fast asleep
the moon and the stars hold you, and quietly creep

you sleep, you stir and your mind floats away
to people and places, and more happy days
an unconscious time, where you get to play
loving each bit of this memorable haze

should you ever wonder, 'bout the ebb and the flow
and who really cares, as you come and you go
there's a heart on the line, just wanting to know
how you've been feeling, how'd your day go


pkh's photo
Tue 07/17/07 08:55 AM
That was beautiful.

LAMom's photo
Tue 07/17/07 10:28 AM
Awwwwwwww Doc that was beautiful flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Tue 07/17/07 12:16 PM
outstanding - ty bigsmile

frankfk's photo
Tue 07/17/07 12:49 PM
'HEART ON LINE' IF DOC IS TRYING TO SAY SOMETHING DEEP OUT OF IT
HAS VALUE AND WORTH BOTH, DOC, BEAUTIFULLY WORDED, EXCELLENTflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Tue 07/17/07 01:03 PM
That is simply bearific Doc.Pleased 2 meet U by the way.I really love the flow with this and how the inner self is questioning the mind.The (self-conscience feel)I think this was a fantastic read & I'd love 2 read more from you.Godspeed!Cybear:tongue: glasses flowerforyou