Topic: Eddie | |
---|---|
My beach bum Hero died today
alone, his song unsung he slipped away in his quiet way and I am quite undone. I always took a sandwich he would trade a rainbow smile a loner, never lonely we would sit, and talk a while. Eddie's hands were always cold as he kept the bottle level his bloodshot eyes were ancient old but they twinkled like the Devil. Eddie always told me he was sure he'd go to Hell he'd done all a man could do and he'd done it very well. Eddie was the Best of Best and he and I are good I sing for him like the angels might 'cause Eddie's found his 'Hood. I'm sure he'll be the perfect guest that old boy had game Eddie is in Heaven now in the 'Hood, from whence he came. for Eddie, my buddy |
|
|
|
Nice Sophie
I could feel the connect between you two... Lovely write.... I volunteer in anti poverty circles. Mind if I share this sometime? |
|
|
|
eddie would have loved your poem soufie,
an awesome tribute if i've ever seen one. |
|
|
|
Nice.
|
|
|
|
Nice Sophie I could feel the connect between you two... Lovely write.... I volunteer in anti poverty circles. Mind if I share this sometime? Help yourself ;-) Thank you. He was a good man. |
|
|
|
eddie would have loved your poem soufie, an awesome tribute if i've ever seen one. If he is in Hell they probably have internet. So I am hoping Eddie sees it :-) |
|
|
|
Nice. Thanks :-) |
|
|
|
Nice write....very touching.
|
|
|
|
Nice write....very touching. I think some peeps do well, wherever they are. Thanks :-) |
|
|
|
You give immortality.
You honor his life, the man ...beyond memory. This was a good and noble writing. I am saving it. |
|
|
|
Goodbyes never come easy,,and your words speak of a very nice shared friend,,who he felt you were to him,,and THATS the best picture he could ever take with him ih his heart....I thank you for being a real human being soufie,,,to me it takes a special person to really see, feel, and touch the heart of a street person....
His loss will always be seen where you two walked,,and now he shall truly have all he will ever need....I'll say a Prayer for you both and May God open HIS GATES WIDE,,for your friend... |
|
|
|
You give immortality. You honor his life, the man ...beyond memory. This was a good and noble writing. I am saving it. Well, I am pretending that Eddie is taking all this in. And smiling :-) |
|
|
|
Beautiful tribute Soufie.
|
|
|
|
very nice
|
|
|
|
Thanks Terry, Penny and Kelp :-)
|
|
|
|
Wow, Soufie. That was beautiful. Thank you for sharing with all of us.
|
|
|
|
Love it!
|
|
|
|
That was a wonderful tribute to your friend. He was very blessed to have you as a friend. I am sure he would be very moved by your words.
|
|
|
|
I like to think that everyone who has
passed through my life, was valuable. Good or bad. Thanks Ruth, FindMe and Machug :-) Truly, he was something else. |
|
|
|
Nice tribute Soufie..
|
|
|