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Topic: Eddie
soufiehere's photo
Mon 10/24/11 03:47 PM
My beach bum Hero died today
alone, his song unsung
he slipped away in his quiet way
and I am quite undone.

I always took a sandwich
he would trade a rainbow smile
a loner, never lonely
we would sit, and talk a while.

Eddie's hands were always cold
as he kept the bottle level
his bloodshot eyes were ancient old
but they twinkled like the Devil.

Eddie always told me
he was sure he'd go to Hell
he'd done all a man could do
and he'd done it very well.

Eddie was the Best of Best
and he and I are good
I sing for him like the angels might
'cause Eddie's found his 'Hood.

I'm sure he'll be the perfect guest
that old boy had game
Eddie is in Heaven now
in the 'Hood, from whence he came.


for Eddie, my buddy



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Mon 10/24/11 04:00 PM
Nice Sophie
I could feel the connect between you two...
Lovely write....
I volunteer in anti poverty circles.
Mind if I share this sometime?

smokeybette's photo
Mon 10/24/11 04:01 PM
eddie would have loved your poem soufie,
an awesome tribute if i've ever seen one.

motowndowntown's photo
Mon 10/24/11 04:03 PM
Nice.


soufiehere's photo
Mon 10/24/11 04:06 PM

Nice Sophie
I could feel the connect between you two...
Lovely write....
I volunteer in anti poverty circles.
Mind if I share this sometime?

Help yourself ;-)
Thank you.
He was a good man.

soufiehere's photo
Mon 10/24/11 04:09 PM

eddie would have loved your poem soufie,
an awesome tribute if i've ever seen one.

If he is in Hell they probably have internet.
So I am hoping Eddie sees it :-)

soufiehere's photo
Mon 10/24/11 04:11 PM

Nice.

Thanks :-)

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Mon 10/24/11 05:05 PM
Nice write....very touching. flowerforyou

soufiehere's photo
Mon 10/24/11 05:35 PM

Nice write....very touching. flowerforyou

I think some peeps do well, wherever they are.
Thanks :-)

krupa's photo
Mon 10/24/11 05:54 PM
You give immortality.

You honor his life, the man ...beyond memory.

This was a good and noble writing.

I am saving it.


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Mon 10/24/11 06:00 PM
:heart: Goodbyes never come easy,,and your words speak of a very nice shared friend,,who he felt you were to him,,and THATS the best picture he could ever take with him ih his heart....I thank you for being a real human being soufie,,,to me it takes a special person to really see, feel, and touch the heart of a street person....:heart:
His loss will always be seen where you two walked,,and now he shall truly have all he will ever need....I'll say a Prayer for you both and May God open HIS GATES WIDE,,for your friend...

soufiehere's photo
Mon 10/24/11 06:04 PM

You give immortality.
You honor his life, the man ...beyond memory.
This was a good and noble writing.
I am saving it.

Well, I am pretending that Eddie
is taking all this in.
And smiling :-)

pennyg281's photo
Mon 10/24/11 08:06 PM
Beautiful tribute Soufie.

kelp1961's photo
Mon 10/24/11 10:45 PM
:thumbsup: very nice

soufiehere's photo
Tue 10/25/11 07:46 AM
Thanks Terry, Penny and Kelp :-)

Ruth34611's photo
Tue 10/25/11 07:50 AM
Wow, Soufie. That was beautiful. Thank you for sharing with all of us. :heart:

FindMe1113's photo
Tue 10/25/11 08:20 AM
Love it!:thumbsup:

machug's photo
Tue 10/25/11 10:38 AM
That was a wonderful tribute to your friend. He was very blessed to have you as a friend. I am sure he would be very moved by your words.

soufiehere's photo
Tue 10/25/11 11:27 AM
I like to think that everyone who has
passed through my life, was valuable.
Good or bad.

Thanks Ruth, FindMe and Machug :-)
Truly, he was something else.

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Tue 10/25/11 01:08 PM
Nice tribute Soufie..

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