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Topic: the early winter
one_end Joined Fri 09/23/11 Posts: 13	Fri 09/23/11 02:57 PM
from shades to shreds i walked for resolution of the self-proclaimed beauty of my mind inside,it hovered and hung like the fish (i never captured) in my string on the flooded farm. Mom said its early winters come home when you feel cold. I entered no respite zone in sympathy of the only i loved for my love knows no boundary and i'm boundless. From fields to fields i wandered for the prickly flower i saw in my nightmare as its early winters on the northern hemisphere.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Fri 09/23/11 03:27 PM


Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Fri 09/23/11 08:06 PM
Nice write, and welcome...

one_end Joined Fri 09/23/11 Posts: 13	Fri 09/23/11 08:12 PM
thank you.

sandandpearls Joined Sat 08/13/11 Posts: 11	Fri 09/23/11 09:12 PM
Great imagery! Thank you.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 09/24/11 11:58 AM
welcome...

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 09/26/11 05:33 PM
nice write

one_end Joined Fri 09/23/11 Posts: 13	Tue 09/27/11 04:36 PM
nice write thank you.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 09/30/11 11:59 AM
In each thirst of wisdoms past,,,,we find our glass delightfully empty... Nice shades of fall days..

Unknow Joined Thu 04/01/10 Posts: 1482	Fri 09/30/11 12:25 PM
nice write

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