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Nope that's not the title of a work. I was asked to fill an empty slot at a poets/writers reading event downtown. I must be nuts but I agreed. I'm trying to decide which ones to do. This next one is high on the list for me, what do ya'll think?
They Lied They lied you know it's really not that bad When you know it's coming... Though I must admit, it's sad What might have been prevented or at least stopped in it's tracks If I never had relented not fallen through the cracks But hey, that's done now there's no one here to blame It's time to move forward hell nothing stays the same Funny how I can dread it yet welcome, with open arms Fear of the unknown can be like that Honestly! Death can have it's charms They all fear a lie and a fable an ugly human stain Playing the part of Able yet treated like I were Cain Enough of that, it bares no fruit and binds the soul like chain Fear of the unknown is at it's root and breeds only hatred and distain So, soon I'll be a memory someone else's wretched pain A lonely night, a cold hard bed darkened skies and falling rain A silent tear in a caring eye a gentle hug, and a warm "goodbye" DaveyB Nov 27 2010 |
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I like your poems
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awwww he did that for me for an early bday present my bday is two days after he wrote that lol
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Edited by
d4tc
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Tue 09/13/11 07:51 PM
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i imagined myself at your reading. i was the guy standing in the back of the room leaning against the wall with my arms crossed at first smiling after you read it.
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Very gentle,,very open,,very well writen,,
It tugs at sanity,,as it pulls us into its depth.. If the only thing I am,, left here to see,,, after my demize. Is but, one small memory to be. Then,,that shall complete me,,, A very nice write man,,, |
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Thank you guys. I am thinking this one really needs to be one of my choices.
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Thank you guys. I am thinking this one really needs to be one of my choices. agreed... |
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Very nice
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Awesome. I enjoyed reading it.
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Really really like this one but no matter what you read it will be amazing and heart felt.
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Well thank all of you. I appreciate the input. I think I have my two poems picked though the first one will be closer to prose than poetry.
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Thanks ArtGurl
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Nice write....
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Thanks Up2, it was a cathartic write, and good to read.
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