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Death questions Life Intrigued by the plethora of a baby's innocence. Death gently surreptitiously, steals its next breath. It holds the hand of a young girl in a speeding car. Staring wondrously, at her magnanimous spirit. The car is soon altered into a twisted metal shell. Death stoops lewdly, by a abandoned homeless woman on a moonless frigid night. It caresses her with a everlasting embrace. Death and Life hold a cognitive dissonance concerning human life. Both agree, the beginning of the day is given but the end of the day is simply not promised. Poem: MHS©Copyright 2011 |
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agreed,fantastic read
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nicely written!
although i confess, it had me yearning for more... |
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Fantastic...
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Thanks all....
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Up2Us....all true....
teasingbrunette |
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Bumping up a old write.....
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Up2Us . . . I'm trying to find the right words but I can't. I'm speechless. This is truly poetry at its best.
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Mon 08/06/12 11:58 AM
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Up2Us . . . I'm trying to find the right words but I can't. I'm speechless. This is truly poetry at its best. With all my tragic writes, one might call me a poetic ambulance chaser... No, actually with all the tragedy in the world. This particular poem came back to mind. |
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I need to say something, but I agree with Mig, wordS, is what we do, and yet you managed to strip me, great write
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Light meets dark, sun meets moon, life meets death...
The Tree Of Life and The Grim Reaper..... Beauty in opposites, well done friend.. |
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What great analogies. you never ur last moment. Thx Up2us.
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Thanks for reading poppashroom, Leigh2154, Cutiepieforyou, and laura329....
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i like how descriptive it was
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i like how descriptive it was
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....and yet, it holds no answers. stirring, and
convincingly, true. |
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Macabre truth, the double edged sword.
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Thanks for reading Uniquely_blessed, bastet126, and Ladywind7...
Sometimes between the silence of each heartbeat, many answers can be clearly heard..... |
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